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If I ever get to revising this comic, this page and the last might end up being entirely rewritten... I admit to letting some issues pile up and affect my work and I'm sorry for that. :( I've bought some new drawing equipment and I've put more effort into writing proper scripts with full dialogue for the next few pages so here's hoping I can turn it around.

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Comments

I can't find the downloadable file for page 11, Has anyone else had this problem?

Cmg

I have a nasty feeling that the next time we see Carol, she'll be fully round... Why do I feel so sorry for her when she's already said she's scared?!

How very selectively exclusive that it's produce! I guess that was the first phase of field tests, then they wanted a larger sample size and started working with the liquid concentrate involving sodas and mass distribution! (?)

Mason Dunne

I feel sorry for those poor kids, watching their Mother turn into a gooseberry then vanish. Otherwise, no complaints with the script on this one!

Ed


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