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Page 7 WIP

Coloring today! I'm thinking I should change that first panel to match the boob-border of the others... and color in that missing piece of boob.

Page 7 WIP

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I just realized the white spot on the last panel is her flicking away the berry. No way she can cold turkey this!

Mason Dunne

I agree, the addition of trying to eat another one shows the addiction that has already been created from them. =o

Loner2000

I'm gonna suggest to go with the boob border, but to also go with maybe try giving the panel line a look of streaming juice trails like tears, or a skin tone color gradient undergoing change of some sort.

Mason Dunne


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