The Older Couple (7/10)
Added 2025-02-04 08:00:10 +0000 UTCThings progress as Amy meets Andre and the two get more comfortable...
Comments
Let the story happen, Shoji. I'm always looking to keep my stories fresh, and as such I like to try new things like this comic. If by the end you don't understand the motivations or the "Magic" of it all, please let me know and I'll try to do better. That being said, just give the story a chance and I hope you'll see that all the changes and sex have meaning :)
Tyler Adams
2025-02-05 23:08:15 +0000 UTCTaylor/Ty/Trinity I know you said you want to focus more on the sexual nature or aspect of the stories moving forward and it’s been a whole new level of realism and rendering sex and it’s great but now I see the plots suffering..take this for example …I love the details of the sex scenes but what I loved about your comics were the uniqueness of the plots you chose that went along with gratuitous sex scenes like the TACO franchise..but this plot IMO has kind of been a vague miss…you have a couple of issues left of this story and I don’t understand the direction..I don’t understand how the Amy character (who is rendered brilliantly btw) is so clueless that her body changed and to what is causing it. It started fine..with Andy and Andre talking about his relationship with Andy and Andy’s relationship with Amy ..but all of a sudden they both (Amy and Andy ) changed with no mention how it happened. Andre never went over the plan what he offered Andy in detail..he just wanted to offer them a job and then (with their new bodies) all we see is the sex happening with Andy and the Andre’s wife and now looks like Andre and Amy are about to have crazy sex (but the mystery remains..why hasn’t Amy realized she physically changed ) like I mentioned it wouldn’t bother me so much if this story was in 12 or 15 parts but a 10 part (according to your calendar ) with only three parts left , I feel the plot is going to be forced at the very end because you would rather showcase the sex scenes (again.. I do enjoy the details of it) but I need to see focus on the story itself because IMO …the sex alone is not flowing well with the plot so far ..which seems so vague and not defined , I hope in your upcoming comics you don’t go the same path because it takes the element of fantasy away from your comics..and when that happens …the flow suffers 🤔 I can only hope …that you with three more parts left in this story we get more direction of what kind of story you have for these characters
Shoji
2025-02-05 14:32:13 +0000 UTC:D
Tyler Adams
2025-02-05 01:10:19 +0000 UTCHad to watch Kara Comet again today !!! Great nasty story great transformation !!! Wish you a nice evening hehe
Stormfries
2025-02-04 17:31:32 +0000 UTCYes. Very 'natural' looking.
Kaffeyette Lektor
2025-02-04 14:12:05 +0000 UTC
