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Added 2024-09-20 07:00:13 +0000 UTCOwen relates her tale to the newbie on the island and vows to be better than they were for Cammy...
Owen relates her tale to the newbie on the island and vows to be better than they were for Cammy...
Comments
I like the twist with the new guy wanting to be a girl first, before the deed, and the reveal of the cartoon kink explains the animation style (although we all know who has the cartoon kink). As Shoji said above, it was a very sudden ending and reveal, especially since the deed was very curtailed with no foreplay or intercourse before the transformation. Maybe, you could have had Chad appear as himself and Owen still as a female cartoon version of himself, so he'd have to explain that cartoon kink to Chad there, then transform into his new real female self before Chad chooses to transform into his new female self. Chad could express his jealousy / envy seeing Owen's new female form and Owen could then explain how the transformation will happen, or he could start to explain and you could skip to the end of the story where Owen offers to make Chad's first time memorable and then go from there. This last episode just seemed a bit abrupt and empty.
Kaffeyette Lektor
2024-09-25 09:50:54 +0000 UTCWhere’s my gift ? LoL
Adamma
2024-09-22 20:07:24 +0000 UTCAnd thank you for all the positivity you bring to the campaign! :)
Tyler Adams
2024-09-22 19:32:07 +0000 UTCIn My B-Day Month, loving the new changes and style and story and transformation and all. Thank you for working hard to giving us all this. Hugz. Thank You T. Hugz
Adamma
2024-09-22 13:41:04 +0000 UTCThese stories are always about the "new guy," and I felt we got to know Owen pretty well. I'll still try and do a better job in the future of fleshing out the characters a little more, and I'll post the complete PDF of Suiting Up as soon as I hear back from Thea :)
Tyler Adams
2024-09-20 22:26:41 +0000 UTCThanks! :)
Tyler Adams
2024-09-20 22:18:53 +0000 UTCA nice ending to a good story
Faye Fatale
2024-09-20 16:14:07 +0000 UTCTaylor..I think the ending could’ve been better..it lacked something ..I can’t put my finger on it. I know it was Owen telling the story all along but to have it in the final moments be the reveal kind of through the flow off , manly because it felt like the ending was rushed somehow and this Chad fellow just came out of nowhere, IDK..if you revisit this concept again which I know you probably will, perhaps, flesh out the characters more and put some narration into it ..look at Areg’s HOD redux ..that’s had some good narrative elements that made the flow work well also..are you going to post a complete pdf of Suiting Up?
Shoji
2024-09-20 13:43:45 +0000 UTC
