Plans are ruined as a surprise guests throws the entire evening into chaos...
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Wow, that's a good point! :D
TGTrinity
2023-07-19 21:46:48 +0000 UTC
I feel like they should be more concerned that the house they are in might be lite on fire at any moment, but on the other hand I totally get why they aren't😉
Kimmy
2023-07-14 19:21:03 +0000 UTC
So happy to hear that :)
TGTrinity
2023-07-10 23:26:56 +0000 UTC
That's certainly true :)
TGTrinity
2023-07-10 23:26:45 +0000 UTC
I thought so :)
TGTrinity
2023-07-10 23:26:30 +0000 UTC
Thanks so much! :)
TGTrinity
2023-07-10 23:26:23 +0000 UTC
Hopefully you were able to enjoy it even though it got crazy :)
TGTrinity
2023-07-10 23:26:14 +0000 UTC
Coming soon :)
TGTrinity
2023-07-10 23:25:54 +0000 UTC
I never intended Kristen to be a villain and wanted to paint Bill in a light that showed they were never going to work out. His friends look up to him, but he's clearly not the best guy out there :)
TGTrinity
2023-07-10 23:25:43 +0000 UTC
I'm not convinced Kristen is really the villain here. Bill agrees not to have strippers at his bachelor party because she's worried about him being unfaithful and he takes advantage of the most flimsy possible work around without batting an eyelid. It may not have been his idea, but he didn't exactly object. Breaking a window and insulting Fred's weight was uncalled for, but he had just lied to her face.
Clearly Kristen and Bill weren't well suited. She was strictly monogamous and he clearly wanted a more open relationship. And that's fine, some people just aren't meant to be. But it's a bit much to claim she didn't deserve him when all we know about Bill is that he lied and cheated on his fiancee. It's a bit much to claim "she never would have trusted you" when he was just doing the one thing she asked him not to do.
Spam_Happy
2023-07-10 21:06:53 +0000 UTC
Trinity you know my next question …where’s the full pdf
Shoji
2023-07-10 19:30:15 +0000 UTC
That ending was a weird to say the least.
Dustin the German Agent
2023-07-10 17:50:57 +0000 UTC
Another happy ending, and a very hot way to end this very sexy story!
Bob Fink
2023-07-10 14:02:06 +0000 UTC
What a wholesome ending.
Faye Fatale
2023-07-10 13:32:38 +0000 UTC
People in your world seem to be much better at adapting to unusual situations than anyone I know.
Kaffeyette Lektor
2023-07-10 09:55:17 +0000 UTC
After all that debauchery, it actually had a wholesome ending. I like it.