Comic Updates: SNU & The Lively Lingerie
Added 2023-02-27 08:00:02 +0000 UTCThe Calendar & Exclusive Library Post now has updated editions of SNU and The Lively Lingerie!
SNU sees a simple change with Matt's history with Phil being mentioned earlier on and a resolution of the two that fits much more with the theme of the comic. Roughly ten changed pages with five new images added.
The Lively Lingerie sees the highly requested change of Steve into Eve added to the comic. Roughly 25 pages were added to the comic to show the change, and I think it definitely makes the comic much better!
I hope you like all the changes, and thanks so much for being Patrons!
Tyler :)
Comments
Cool, so even in a 2-D format, with the lighting, colour and shading effects, you can have a 'good side' and 'bad side'. Interesting. Does that mean The Lingerie changes everyone into a Lynn copy, except Margie? Or just men become Lynn? Or just the people it truly possesses become Lynn, and because Margie never accepted The Lingerie, it didn’t turn her into a Lynn (make her ‘special’). After she took it off, because she never surrendered herself to The Lingerie, the changes didn't stick? So, who was the first Lynn in Levi's shop? She looked different to Larry-Lynn and Eve (a bit like Angelina Jolie crossed with Zoey Powers from some angles), or was she just an avatar of The Lingerie, because that Lynn vanished when The Lingerie took over the sales pitch? Some commenters complained about Lynn’s face, but I think after she allowed herself to become ‘enhanced’ by The Lingerie, her face looked quite feminine and attractive and so did Eve’s after she was 'enhanced'. However: (a) Lynn’s silver and black eye make-up is quite intense and her hazel / yellow eyes clashed a bit; (b) Lynn’s expressions were quite often frown / snarl-like / malevolent / intense a lot of the time, with narrowed eyes and lowered eye-brows, which made her look even more extreme. (c) I love a ‘bob’ or ‘China doll’ hairdo (LOVE – Zoey/Angelina-Lynn looked stunning), but I think the hair hanging forward around Larry-Lynn’s face covered up some of her more feminised features or accentuated the angularity of her chin. She seems to have a 'long', angular face. When Larry-Lynn seemed uncertain, confused, afraid or excited, or she pulled her hair away from her jaw-line, I thought her features looked softer, rounder or more feminine / attractive. If Eve has the same face as Larry-Lynn, with the long hair tied back away from her face, a happy, excited expression, blue eyes and softer make-up, she looks younger and more attractive. Maybe, she is younger, but the face looks different even if it is the same. More of what you said above, perhaps.
Kaffeyette Lektor
2023-03-01 12:37:36 +0000 UTCIt's the angle and expression that makes her look younger, and I checked while making it because she looked younger to me as well :)
TGTrinity
2023-02-28 21:33:01 +0000 UTCI agree. The additions do improve the comics by filling in some blanks. The extra SNU dialogue makes the change with Laney seem much more plausible and I like the domineering mood she's in. It's also interesting in TLL how Eve originally started out looking exactly like Lynn, then changed to a younger version with a more feminine face. Did you change some of Lynn's facial features too? Her face seemed to look more feminine in later frames or is that just my imagination / desensitisation?
Kaffeyette Lektor
2023-02-28 11:55:38 +0000 UTCI believe the changes genuinely make them each better, which is why I opened up all the feedback :)
TGTrinity
2023-02-27 22:28:19 +0000 UTCHappy to hear it was worth the time :)
TGTrinity
2023-02-27 22:27:21 +0000 UTCWasn't expecting a director's cut! Badass changes! After reading them again, can confirm they make a difference. Love the Eve scene, especially. 😎🤙
Star Journeyfriend
2023-02-27 09:22:54 +0000 UTCThank you for updating those two. I know I wasn't the only one that suggested both but I still want to say thank you for always keeping an open mind to constructive thoughts. :)
RyPaCo
2023-02-27 08:02:35 +0000 UTC
