Immersion (16/18)
Added 2023-01-20 08:00:03 +0000 UTCDarci gets the ball rolling on what Tyson's future will look like...
Comments
I think it wraps up nicely, and you'll have two more parts to look forward to :)
TGTrinity
2023-01-20 20:20:17 +0000 UTCThanks! When I decided to add Darci to the story I wanted to keep her devious energy but point it in a good direction, so I'm glad that came across :)
TGTrinity
2023-01-20 20:19:40 +0000 UTCI'm aiming for her to be a "Chaotic Good" character :)
TGTrinity
2023-01-20 20:18:32 +0000 UTCLooks like Darci may be changing after all and becoming more compassionate, her tactics are still a tad drastic, but I love the results.
Bob Fink
2023-01-20 15:03:13 +0000 UTCThis is how you do a redemption arc! I've always loved Darci as a character, but her actions always made me despise her. This story has shown that she's still fundamentally the same person, but is now operating with a healed/healing heart and a better outlook because she worked to better herself. I love this. I can't wait for the end.
Faye Fatale
2023-01-20 13:45:10 +0000 UTCAwesome continuation! I can't wait to see how everything unfolds in the end :) Splendid job!
Amarylae
2023-01-20 08:23:01 +0000 UTC
