Witness Protection: My Wife's Twin (Part 16)
Added 2022-01-03 08:00:03 +0000 UTCBonnie does her best to act like one of the girls in their locker room, but this causes Janet to notice something peculiar...
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Comments
Me too :)
TGTrinity
2022-01-05 06:17:28 +0000 UTCLoving all the comments made π
Alison St John
2022-01-04 08:08:40 +0000 UTCI hope so too! :D
TGTrinity
2022-01-04 00:14:06 +0000 UTCMore development coming fast :D
TGTrinity
2022-01-04 00:12:37 +0000 UTCThe "Oh my God" is coming soon :D
TGTrinity
2022-01-04 00:09:44 +0000 UTCI'm siding with the blondes on this one :D
TGTrinity
2022-01-04 00:09:11 +0000 UTCI don't want to say anything that could spoil things, but remember I'm a fan of happy or happy adjacent endings :)
TGTrinity
2022-01-04 00:08:17 +0000 UTCThings will start moving very fast very soon :D
TGTrinity
2022-01-04 00:07:01 +0000 UTCLove this comic so much. Best thing since The Actor. The slow rollout is killing me (death by anticipation) but hoping the inference at the end of this episode leads Bonnie to a realization, at least as long as sheβs in that form.
Kirsten Roberts
2022-01-03 21:49:13 +0000 UTCI love both characters, but "Janet" needs to be a LOT more supportive of "Bonnie." This is not against the writing, cuz I love it. Janet just got prettier (and more shapely) - maybe it's gone to her head a bit? But Bonnie went through a sex change he/she didn't want or need, and is coping with emotions and hormones he never had. On top of that, they're in hiding from someone who'd kill them in a second. It feels like Janet is throwing Bonnie to the wolves and making her deal with it alone. I only see this ending badly for the two of them. I'm crossing my fingers everything works out in the end, but Janet needs to wake up and help her husband before something... bad happens... (I.e.: Deano...) - Great stuff! Keep it coming! :o) I can't wait for more!
Larry Talbot
2022-01-03 19:03:49 +0000 UTCWelcome back! And I love how Bonnie's hair turned out, she looks hotter as a brunette.
Bob Fink
2022-01-03 15:24:31 +0000 UTCI would have just pointed out the physiological reactions. Probably would have driven up the angst and denial, but probably would get to the expected "oh my god" moment sooner.
Skippy Hugo
2022-01-03 15:00:56 +0000 UTCThoroughly enjoying this story Tyler, it's getting interesting how things are starting to develop, especially the fact they aren't communicating their true feelings and keeping their thoughts to themselves.... π€π
Alison St John
2022-01-03 09:18:51 +0000 UTCHehe Bonnie is so cute when sheβs confused! I hope the two βsistersβ are able to come to an understanding and love each other.
Jenni Starr
2022-01-03 08:43:26 +0000 UTC
