The Actor: Premier (Part 7)
Added 2021-06-17 07:00:04 +0000 UTCAndi and Miranda have it out...
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Trip ending? Also, it sounds like you're annoyed with the sex at the end (it's so hard to tell with writing), but I do want to point out that Miranda made it a point to say it wasn't the sex that was great but the fact that it was Andrew and her reconnecting. In later chapters you'll see exactly how she feels about the sex they're sharing, which hopefully paints this encounter more in the light I was intending. Thanks for your thoughts :)
TGTrinity
2021-06-18 02:43:51 +0000 UTCYeah, you can say that :)
TGTrinity
2021-06-18 02:40:32 +0000 UTCThe last "Andrew" of the scene was meant to show that it's the man she loves and not necessarily the woman she's become. I made it more obvious in an earlier script, but felt it was better to leave it open :)
TGTrinity
2021-06-18 02:40:19 +0000 UTCGreat ending to this chapter and showing how life really would be if this happened. But now with the last scene, you have me wondering if somehow Andi turned back into Andrew.
Bob Fink
2021-06-17 13:59:16 +0000 UTCAh, Andrew is so screwed up.
Ray
2021-06-17 13:10:05 +0000 UTCThat purple text box...no, I don't think it means going for the maximum trip ending. honestly, her having issues with the idea of Andrew / Andi's state and how things are is entirely realistic, and I was tired of seeing people just go "Oh, you're now a woman! Now we're lesbians lol!" when that is not how...anything works It ending in sex anyway was...expected.
Eric Ramont
2021-06-17 07:30:25 +0000 UTC
