Analogue: Sequence 6 (Complete)
Added 2020-05-11 07:01:00 +0000 UTCOne year later...
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Thank you! This one was a difficult one to wrap up (I have, like, 4 alternate endings), but this is the one I was happiest with :)
TGTrinity
2020-05-18 17:51:58 +0000 UTCI think it was a good ending. It was a happier one than I expected, and a more moral one. It showed Kirk/Kira had more substance than expected, or at least grew more as a character. I think leaving Heidi's fate unspecified was also a good move. People can use their imagination about how she finished up - write their own ending, as they see fit. I don't like stories that spoon feed the reader every detail. I like to have my expectations and imagination challenged. It makes the story more memorable. Well done.
Kaffeyette Lektor
2020-05-18 16:19:19 +0000 UTCThank you! :)
TGTrinity
2020-05-15 20:29:20 +0000 UTCI think I have another J/H story in me :)
TGTrinity
2020-05-15 20:29:07 +0000 UTCGood ending of the story. Hope you can do another JEckyll/Hyde story. MAybe with potions
AC Marvel
2020-05-14 23:40:05 +0000 UTCThis was a lot of fun. And as I said before, that new model's face is angelic!
Artemesia
2020-05-14 21:49:33 +0000 UTCI appreciate your thoughts, but I'm happy with how this ended. It was actually meant to end in a much darker and unhappy fashion, but I couldn't pull the trigger and do that to Kirk and Gwen.
TGTrinity
2020-05-14 19:37:14 +0000 UTCThe first encounter with Dennis was all Kirk, even though Heidi did a fair amount to convince her.
TGTrinity
2020-05-14 19:34:54 +0000 UTCAlso, Kirk/Kira mentions here that he/she strayed from Gwen once before. When did that happen? I'm sure I'm forgetting something. I do know that when Kimmy was in control of Kirk, Kimmy slept around with guys and Gwen's lesbian sister. But that was Kimmy, not Kirk. Was there a time when Kirk slept with another woman, a woman that wasn't Gwen?
Alex Smyth
2020-05-14 05:22:47 +0000 UTCI too feel like there was more story to tell here. Maybe another chapter or two. I would like to have seen Kirk/Kira adjusting in their relationship. Figuring out how to continue as a couple. Last chapter ended with Kirk/Kira trying to tell Gwen about how Heidi made her only attracted to men, but didn't and Gwen just told Kirk/Kira that we'll figure something out. And then here, they're already adjusted because the story skips a year ahead. And what Kirk's/Kira's life? What's that like now? Like his/her job? Does Kirk/Kira work the same job as before? Also, they mention about Kirk/Kira being in a facility, where they try to figure out what happen to Kirk/Kira. I would have also liked to have seen Kirk's/Kira's time in the facility. What did they figure out about Kirk/Kira there? Can they fix Kirk/Kira? If so, how? If not, why not? I just feel that there's more potential for story here. I am glad that Kirk/Kira and Gwen are still together though. I still feel bad though that he's still stuck as a woman who's attracted to men. In a way, it feels like, to me, that Heidi still got a win. She may have not gotten revenge on Kirk's/Kira's sister, but she still screwed over Kirk/Kira, leaving him/her looking like an overly busty blonde bimbo and making her only attracted to cocks. And now Kirk/Kira and Gwen have to struggle to keep their relationship going, since it seems here that there are times that Kirk/Kira is left unsatisfied after sex with Gwen. And while Heidi wasn't able to ruin Kirk/Kira and Gwen's relationship, I feel like if Heidi could still see into Kirk's/Kira's universe, would still be pleased with the fact that Kirk/Kira and Gwen have to struggle to keep their relationship going. Heidi would especially be pleased with the fact that there are times that Kirk/Kira is left unsatisfied by his/her own wife. I do like the message about not taking the easy way in life becoming a stronger person because of that. Though, now that Kirk/Kira has learned that lesson, I do hope that they find a way to fix him/her and make him back to normal. While it's nice to want to work hard and not take the easy way out, this is one instance where I feel that Kirk/Kira shouldn't have to struggle. Especially for Gwen's sake, since she's struggling along side him/her with some nights leaving Kirk/Kira unsatisfied. Kirk/Kira getting turned back to normal could be a reward for not taking the easy way out and the struggle he's/she's been going through, as well as a reward for stopping Heidi's plans. And Kirk could continue applying the lesson of not taking the easy way out to rest of his life. The lesson he learned by struggling and working hard. I just like seeing good, if a bit flawed people get a happy ending. Especially if that person works on that flaw in the story. I know not every story can end with a 100% happy ending, but this is one instance where I hoped that would be the case. Good job on the story. While I'd hoped for a much happier ending, you did so very well in getting me invested in these characters and root for them. Enough to want to see them get a 100% happy ending.
Alex Smyth
2020-05-14 05:19:16 +0000 UTCThanks, and I feel no epilogue is in the cards.
TGTrinity
2020-05-13 01:09:17 +0000 UTCI understand you wanting to see more, but I think this is the best place to leave the story and the characters.
TGTrinity
2020-05-13 01:08:43 +0000 UTCI don't think that Kim is gone, as she was always a part of Kirk to begin with. Those highly feminine parts of Kirk were what we were seeing, so you can almost say that Kira is a mix of Kirk and Kim.
TGTrinity
2020-05-13 01:07:47 +0000 UTCIt would be underwhelming, so I hope you're okay that I end things as they are :)
TGTrinity
2020-05-13 01:06:29 +0000 UTCI think it's safe to assume that Kira's needed to make some major life changes, but I wanted to spend the time showing that the relationship between her and Gwen is solid.
TGTrinity
2020-05-13 01:05:45 +0000 UTCThanks :)
TGTrinity
2020-05-13 01:04:25 +0000 UTCThanks :D
TGTrinity
2020-05-13 00:59:56 +0000 UTCSince the other chapters have ended with 'End of sequence 5' and this one ended with 'The End' I believe this is it.
Am1end
2020-05-12 20:34:13 +0000 UTCTrinity, So looks like he’s stuck as Kira ..oh well at least he’s not Heidi 🤔 Are you planning another chapter Trinity? Or is this it
Shoji
2020-05-11 18:32:58 +0000 UTCI like this ending which blends flawed characters with a happy esque ending, its also very sexy and leaves you wanting more out of this characters although their story is complete. :D
Nemea
2020-05-11 16:20:04 +0000 UTCI'm more than happy with how this all ended, Kira and Gwen are so happy and at peace with their situation. I too would love a short epilogue of how Heidi is getting along with her extra appendage. :D
Bob Fink
2020-05-11 14:05:50 +0000 UTCI want to see what happened with Heidi, since a lot of the story included her. Seeing her fate after what she did would be some closure that I need.
TgFervor
2020-05-11 13:00:56 +0000 UTCI have mixed feelings. Krik./Kira deserved a happy ending here and I'm glad they got it (even if that happy ending has her in a worse position than when she started.), but I feel a lack of resolution with the Kim subplot. I know i'm a broken record about her (can you have a waifu from niche porn?), but there was an interesting moral question that came up regarding her right to exist that i would have like to see explored...Also she's so damn hot
idegoido
2020-05-11 12:28:16 +0000 UTCI too need to see an epilogue that shows how Heidi’s handling her mega cock. Hopefully rather poorly. :)
Emmitt Cleveland
2020-05-11 12:16:10 +0000 UTCI've been dreading this update all week, yet here it is brightening my day. I'm beyond happy that Kira and Gwen worked things out and stayed together. Gwen is such a good partner and she seems so happy with Kira. I with there had of been just a tick more in the last chapter. Just a few things, like Kira's job situation and if she still does the same thing, and Heidi's fate, but overall I'm elated to see this very long struggle end happily.
Faye Fatale
2020-05-11 08:24:34 +0000 UTCThats one way to satisfy the cock hungry kinda not really hha but yes Mircasta nails it a sweet ending :) ♥
Hi!MyNameIsBimboFkToy
2020-05-11 08:11:58 +0000 UTCSeconded
Furstone
2020-05-11 07:17:23 +0000 UTCThat was a sweet ending kinda would like to see a one off of Heidi’s fate though.
Mircasta
2020-05-11 07:08:20 +0000 UTC
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