The Tarnished Potter Chapter 14 (The Boy Who Was Lost)
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Plissss sube pronto más cap me estoy muriendo de las ansias por favor sube algunos cap lo más pronto que puedas gracias
alba perez
2025-10-23 18:11:23 +0000 UTCCuando subirás próximo cap muero por saber que pasa ha continuación
alba perez
2025-10-07 18:34:21 +0000 UTCOhhh that was such a good chapter!! I kinda like how you’ve adapted the Lands in Between to fit a story. There’s lots of things you’ve changed, adding NPCs, changing buildings (like the state of the Church of Dragon Communion and the people living in it), weapon locations but I love it! I’ve read a couple of Elden Ring stories where Harry is kinda following the game and everything is similar, which is fun in its own way. But plot-wise, it’s much more interesting like you’re doing. I certainly wasn’t expecting Blaidd to pull out the Godslayer Greatsword ^^ At least Harry won’t have to fight the Godskin Noble at the base of the Limgrave tower. What kind of “build” are you planning for Harry? I know he’ll be using dragon sorceries and lightning spells but he still only has a basic sword. Will it be Moonveil Katana? The Bloodhound fang? The Sword of Night and Flame? I also don’t know what dagger it was that Ranni gave him… is it being kept secret on purpose? If it is, I’m sure it’s the Black Knife. Anyway, loved the chapter, can’t wait for more. Did this story win any poll for extra chapter? Because I didn’t recognise the guy who went to talk to Sirius and I can’t wait for him to join Harry in the lands in Between. PS: can you tell us what’s the plan for Harry and co? Are they gonna to meet up with Gory? They could then go get the Needle from Commander O’Neil. Thats would be super useful for Millicent. Even if it’s super cute that Harry’s carrying her around and getting flustered. I wonder if you’ll change the location of her prosthesis. Because otherwise getting it from the Shaded Castle might be quite tricky
TheWateringWizard
2025-09-24 08:27:59 +0000 UTCExcellent chapter, perhaps one of your best. You had many excellent turns of phrase, “laugh had all the warmth of February rain” was particularly descriptive and new. The character work was great, top to bottom. I’m really enjoying your characterization of the denizens in The Lands Between, and the confrontation between Snape and Sirius/Minerva was excellent. On a more base note, I’m absolutely hoping Harry winds up with a dragon girlfriend. 😁 Great work!
Erinnyes
2025-09-24 06:16:48 +0000 UTC
