A Nundu for A Pet Chapter 72 (A Seed of Doubt in British Soil)
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Shoe?
Drinor
2025-08-28 16:37:59 +0000 UTCYou think to linear. You are still trying to draw this fanfiction back to the original story. The point of fanfiction and even patreon is create something you like, while it’s good to make stories that your readers like if ur not like the story then it’s pointless
Shakeandbake gaming
2025-08-28 03:35:51 +0000 UTCeh... this story has been drifting into unrealistic anime-land for a while now. I first felt it strongly, while Andromeda was 'educating' Harry and Tonks about foreign customs. Sure, I suppose it was meant to be humorous. But IRL, nobody can handle cramming that much stuff in such a short period - they would've ended up forgetting the very basics and doing an absolutely embarrassing faux pas. Now, we come to this chapter, where the whole better-than-Hogwarts thing is taken to such exaggerated lengths that it makes The Santi's portrayal of Durmstrang look realistic and grounded. One wonders, if BB was having such beyond-world-class education, why it took an Englishman to save Europe from Grindelwald? Or why in this chapter, despite having three Professors, students were struggling with apparently not too difficult problems? Unless of course, this was a setup designed to get Harry to teach them?
pra86
2025-08-28 03:21:08 +0000 UTCJust waiting for the other shoe to drop.
Stephen Alworth
2025-08-28 02:37:19 +0000 UTCHow will the British Ministry respond to their mistake of trying to control Harry if he decides to go to France or another country? And what about the reaction of the Hogwarts staff to all this? I can’t wait for Harry’s meeting with Nicolas!
Mauricio Sanchez
2025-08-28 02:30:07 +0000 UTCI couldn't agree more. Also there is so few where he goes to a different school that it would be cool to have him switch it up from Hogwarts.
Ironeggward
2025-08-28 00:41:51 +0000 UTCBritan has done nothing for him, and has acted against him. I'm fully in favor of him relocating to where he is appreciated.
Derek Pugh
2025-08-28 00:10:56 +0000 UTCHogwarts and the British Ministry better step up because their loosing Harry by the second
Kurupt
2025-08-27 23:21:33 +0000 UTCthese two are cute and the banter between them is quite fun
Elias
2025-08-27 23:20:06 +0000 UTC
