XaiJu
Drinor
Drinor

patreon


A Nundu for A Pet Chapter 66 (The Weight of Brilliant Things)

Click the LINK Below to Read the Chapter

https://docs.google.com/document/d/10dkA8Co8vIFO4mMKPyxcT1OEKb1-mcylyl5KEE1soxo/edit?usp=sharing

Comments

Very interesting chapter! 1) Greengrass family wants Harry in their business. They understand from both official and unofficial sources (Daphne and Astoria) that Harry's magical innovations are only begining. Hence, they hope to lure him into business relationships before others. However, given Harry's international connections, they will fail. Then, the next card they will use will be Daphne or Astoria as a political wife. Plus, Harry will cure Astoria. 2) it appears part Black's inheritance is still unclaimed. Hinting that Harry is the heir to Black family. 3) Harry will need several wives to continue all the houses in his possession, Potter, Black, Greengrass, etc. If Tonks will be lady Potter, then Daphne will be lady Greengrass, Astoria will be lady Black. In addition, Amelia Bonnes is looking for worthy husband for Sussan to continue Bonnes house. With Harry as her husband consorts, the Bonnes house will continue, while Harry becomes the most powerful politician in the UK.

Kuronokishi

Because usually this story would have been updated only once a month like normally, but once a month I publish a 'Which Story should get an extra chapter this Month' Poll, and A Nundu for A Pet is always the winner, that makes it twice a month, and one of my Patrons is in the highest tier, and that allows them to ask for a story they want to be updated four extra times every month as long as they are Patrons, so that makes it six updates of a Nundu for A Pet every month.

Drinor

Why does this get updated so often and your other fics just 1 a month or every 2 weeks this gets a update nearly every day or every 2 days?

Robbie richards

Not really. Why would Tonks know so much about talisman making? Sure, she helped him with her ability, but Harry was the one who did all the work, and it is not like Tonks and Harry talk much about Talisman making; she only knows slightly more than the average person about making a Talisman. Second, why would becoming an Auror mean that she should look into politics? An Auror is just a magical police, and I don’t see why Tonks would think she needs to know anything about politics to become one. She would need to look into politics only if she reaches higher ranks, but right now, she only wants to become an Auror.

Drinor

Kinda meh chap. Over half was a review of what was going on and it doesn't make much sense on how little Tonks knows about the talismans given her close involvement with Harry, not to mention her aspirations to become an auror should induce her to looking more into the political side of the world, which she really should be as she can look at how much some political sense helped Harry.

DaoOfAnime

This chapter is an eye opening for Harry, letting him know that his travels can be more than just him meeting old friends and learning new things.

Drinor

The Other Countries are not exactly aware of the British Ministry's condition. Sure, some of them might know that Fudge is not smart; they might know that England does not favor those that are not Pure Blood, but they don't live in England, and the little information they might receive simply paints a picture that Fudge is not the brightest bulb in the shop. The Italy Minister might be a bit more aware that Fudge is stupid, but you need to remember that deciding not to buy more of Harry's Talismans is a vote thing, Fudge cannot decide on his own that the Ministry will not buy more of them, it's a vote thing, so the other countries might think that since the majority of people in the Ministry are not voting for Harry's talisman, then they will think twice before deciding to contact Harry or not.

Drinor

Another excellent chapter! I look forward to seeing where this plot thread goes with Cassiopeia

Cody

Harry should hire Penelope clearwater or another recent grad to start automating the talisman production. Also he shluld get his permits in Italy. Circumvent Fudge and show him up lol

Romavictrix

Great chapter! I know that Nymphadora, Fleur, and Daphne will be Harry's partners — but what about Susan?

Mauricio Sanchez

Does Harry have an automated talisman production line? Or plans to hire people to work on them? There's no other way to handle thousands of sales. As for the Greengrass' proposal, it is utter BS. I'm sure most countries are aware of the state of the British ministry, that the Italians are buying in bulk. Russia has already seen the effectiveness of the thing, and he could probably get a sale from France too.

pra86

I completely agree. He needs to shows the Greengrass's that they are the ones missing out and that they miscalculated.

Ironeggward

Very good chapter. But I really hope Harry doesn't accept Cassiopeia's proposal. He is a genius, and as I mentioned a few chapters ago, Harry just needs to conquer all the countries he visits, and when he impresses them, other countries will automatically come closer to him, and thus the cycle continues. He doesn't need the Greengrasses' money, which, despite being neutral in the war, still gave gold to the Dark Lord. Harry doesn't need blood-stained money. Please, I hope this doesn't happen. And once again, when Harry finds out that Sirius Black is imprisoned without trial, things will get tough for the Ministry.

João Victor Gomes Alves

It’s fixed, an app I use to fix Grammarly errors. ‘Asking how Susan is doing’ is supposed to be like that, and Harry asked Amelia about Susan.

Drinor

You left some debug text in. “Here's the revised text with the requested changes:” “Asking how Susan is doing”

Erinnyes


More Creators