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A Dragon Kissed by Sun Chapter 84 (The Dragon's Legacy)

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I started this story four years ago, and back then my English left a lot to be desired. So, yeah I used to make a lot of grammer mistakes, and I wasn't that good of a writer back then. Sorry.

Drinor

Wait, am I missing something? What happened to the Westerlands? Every Warden/Lord Paramount house kept their titles except Arryn? Jaehaerys didn’t annex any land into the Crownlands? Seriously??? It is always the worst thing ever when a Targaryen restoration story ends things the same as pre-rebellion. Makes zero sense for the Targaryens not to shore up more power so they don’t find themselves in the same vulnerable position if they lose their dragons. Completely asinine. Very disappointing to read.

sonicmalibu

Were you like super young when you started this story? I been trying to read it and the earliest chapters are frankly atrociously written. I learned of you through A Golden Dragon which is written well. But it seems like your earlier stories have a million writing mistakes in every chapter.

sonicmalibu

Absolutely brilliant end to this story! Loved the flashback how peaceful and full of family fluff it was, fantastic! Congrats on finishing this

TheWateringWizard

Yes. We Shall. Next Month.

Drinor

Are we going to have a prince of house targaryen some day?

Imperatororbis

I loved it good story!

Winter

Congratulation buddy to be able to finish this amazing story , i hope you will find time to finish the others one, take care of yourself.

MAEGHT Maxime

I'm really happy you enjoyed this Story.

Drinor

This was an amazing story. So Glad it got a peaceful ending and i hope there are many other stories you have that are waiting for us to read. Keep bring us more

Robert Hernandez


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