The Golden Dragon Chapter 1 (A Lioness and A Dragon)
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Oh this is interesting!
Stephhh
2025-01-17 20:42:48 +0000 UTCI’m happy to hear that
Drinor
2025-01-05 21:52:14 +0000 UTCI absolutely love this one. Keep it coming
Julien
2025-01-05 21:49:33 +0000 UTCI'm happy to hear that.
Drinor
2024-12-29 11:47:02 +0000 UTCThis is... fascinating. I only imagine what will happen to the North in this, and Lyanna.
Longclaw16
2024-12-28 23:13:12 +0000 UTCIs there a synopsis
Conner Jackson
2024-12-20 12:00:52 +0000 UTCWhy would Tywin or Cersei want Jon to be fostered in The North of all places? If they wanted him fostered somewhere, it would make more sense for it to be The Reach since they have the largest army and a lot of food.
Drinor
2024-12-14 10:39:59 +0000 UTCWhy not have this child grow up in the westerlands and also get sent for fostering in the north that way the west and north might actually work together …. Although im not sure cause it tywin still got people killed then idk
Winter
2024-12-13 20:33:28 +0000 UTCLove it can’t wait for more content
Captain Morgan
2024-12-09 20:26:15 +0000 UTCDaeron won't be with Sansa, but Arya is an option. I'm glad you like the name.
Drinor
2024-12-08 15:18:17 +0000 UTCThe Cannon will change in this story; this is not going to be a retelling of Canon, but Jon is half Lannister.
Drinor
2024-12-08 15:16:52 +0000 UTCTheir fate will be revealed later, but it will make sense once it's revealed.
Drinor
2024-12-08 15:13:35 +0000 UTCSo since Rheagar never sang the song of ice and fire, does that mean one of Dearon's wives will be Sansa? If so I would be interested to see it. The only good version of the pairing I have read so far is Father of Dragons. Also dig his Targereon name is unique.
StrevHd
2024-12-08 12:41:43 +0000 UTCRe reading this for the second time now, I think the thing I find most intriguing is that Cersi will actually care for and protect Jon, most of the stories where Cersi has a kid beyond the cannon three usually ends up with her hating the child in question and favoring Joffrey and cannon not really changing much despite the kid being better in every way while also being part lion.
Elias
2024-12-08 08:07:59 +0000 UTCWait wait this makes no sense if lyanna didnt get abducted that means arthur dayne gerold hightower oswell whent barristan selmy lewyn martell and darry are alive ?
Winter
2024-12-08 00:13:40 +0000 UTCI am glad you like it.
Drinor
2024-12-07 19:24:35 +0000 UTCYou’ve done it again Drinor
Abdoulaye Sarr
2024-12-07 07:05:18 +0000 UTCLove it
Gilgamos
2024-12-07 01:26:53 +0000 UTCWell in that case it's perfect😂
TheChosenOne
2024-12-06 18:44:41 +0000 UTCJon Arryn will try to convince Robert to leave Rhaenys to live with the Dornish, but when Robert's mind is set on something, nothing can change it. Cersei will see her son with Rhaegar as her only real son, like Viserys with Rhaenyra.
Drinor
2024-12-06 09:46:43 +0000 UTCWell, that's the name I wanted as well, but it seems that while writing the chapter, I wrote Daenor instead of Daeron. Now it's fixed.
Drinor
2024-12-06 09:44:22 +0000 UTCTywin is a smart man, he will try to see how things play out before he makes a decision.
Drinor
2024-12-06 09:43:07 +0000 UTCWhen it comes to Jon's first animal companion, it will be a surprise.
Drinor
2024-12-06 09:42:41 +0000 UTCWell, when it comes to his love interest. I know Rhaenys will be one, but I have yet to decide which will be the second one.
Drinor
2024-12-06 09:42:04 +0000 UTCSandor will become his bodyguard, and it will be quite entertaining.
Drinor
2024-12-06 09:40:58 +0000 UTCI was thinking more along it could make sense and help with the story. A white lion would help new readers see it as “different version” of ghost since he’s kinda part of the old gods. Cersei and Rhaegar got married via old gods and the new right?
Michael Turner
2024-12-05 23:39:10 +0000 UTCI like the way the story is being set up... though I'm curious where Rhaenys will be if Jon Arryn spared her, likely Dorne, or if not, in exile like Viserys and Daenerys are, if their positions remains the same... I like the name, never heard it before, Unique valyrian names are great for establishing a unique identity for the character. Curious as to how this will develop, Cersei would likely seek to have her young dragon on the Iron Throne in the future, no matter the cost... though whether or not she has any more children, whether by Robert or Jaime, who would serve as an obstacle, let alone rhe remaining Targaryens, is a question yet to be answered. A great start, can't wait for Chapter 2.
Lost_Monarch
2024-12-05 22:42:09 +0000 UTCPerhaps, the Lannister kings in the past were recorded to have Lions, although their "bonds" with them were questionable, I'm pretty sure one of them was eaten by their own lions.
Lost_Monarch
2024-12-05 22:38:51 +0000 UTCHis Bastard name or Targaryen name?
Drinor
2024-12-05 22:15:17 +0000 UTCI’m happy to hear that.
Drinor
2024-12-05 22:14:57 +0000 UTCThis one will be updated again only if it wins in the next poll.
Drinor
2024-12-05 22:14:47 +0000 UTCGlad you like it
Drinor
2024-12-05 22:14:17 +0000 UTCCersei has no reason to give a fuck about Rhaenys. Right now, she wants to make sure her son survives, and later, she will think of ways to get him to the Throne. But right now, Tywin is the one who has her son, and she knows her father won’t show mercy if she doesn’t do what he says.
Drinor
2024-12-05 22:14:08 +0000 UTCGreat start. Not a fan of his Targaryen name though so maybe just name him Daeron.
TheChosenOne
2024-12-05 22:13:30 +0000 UTCIt will be quite a unique experience.
Drinor
2024-12-05 22:11:37 +0000 UTCI hope it meets your expectations.
Drinor
2024-12-05 22:11:22 +0000 UTCHonestly I think Tywin will try to find a way to make his grandson the true heir to the iron throne
Manuel Arreola Torres
2024-12-05 21:35:24 +0000 UTCWill Daenor have a white lion as his companion? A name day gift from his “father”
Michael Turner
2024-12-05 21:19:37 +0000 UTCAlso the love interests could be Arianne since he’s a “bastard” he could be safe there. It’s also close to where dragons have disappeared in the past.
Michael Turner
2024-12-05 20:11:35 +0000 UTCAwesome story, I like the names. I hope Sandor Clegane becomes his bodyguard and they have some adventures.
Michael Turner
2024-12-05 20:09:18 +0000 UTCNot a fan of the name tbh, but love the start of this story
waitwosius
2024-12-05 19:16:44 +0000 UTCI am all in on this.
J T
2024-12-05 19:00:34 +0000 UTCgood story just wish you would finish the others before starting new ones but good start
Anthony Russell
2024-12-05 18:19:48 +0000 UTCI like it
Elias
2024-12-05 18:07:44 +0000 UTCI see this as something new, not everyone has written a story like this. I see Deanor wedding Rhaenys since she is alive and Robert will most likely have her inside of the Red Keep as a hostage to keep the Martells in line. Cersei will most likely plan out to either kill Robert as Queen and getting Rhaenys out of the Red Keep to her son or flee with Rhaenys and Daenor in secret. But will see how this goes
Robert Hernandez
2024-12-05 18:04:51 +0000 UTCCan’t wait to see how this one plays out
Julien
2024-12-05 18:04:29 +0000 UTCFinally I’ve been looking forward to this
Captain Morgan
2024-12-05 17:57:36 +0000 UTC
