You are the only Flower of my Life Chapter 7 (The Dragon Was Easier)
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Comments
Sorry to say this but the βnervous to meet the parentsβ gag dragged on for a little too long. Especially because canon Harry would never be this outwardly nervous and start acting crazy like that. But it was still an enjoyable chapter. I donβt know if the Harry Potter adventure books are canon but I find the idea hilarious.
TheWateringWizard
2025-01-18 07:45:30 +0000 UTCYeah, I noticed that, too, after I published the chapter, so I will make sure to publish the next chapter soon.
Drinor
2024-11-18 07:47:27 +0000 UTCNot bad. I love the story as a whole but I admit the "Harry panicking about meeting the parents" gag drug out longer than it needed to. Overall love the characters and you've done a wonderful job, this was just a bit slow because it was about 3/4 of a chapter dedicated to one joke. :) Looking forward to more!
Erinnyes
2024-11-18 01:54:57 +0000 UTC
