You are the only Flower of my Life Chapter 1
Added 2024-06-12 15:48:50 +0000 UTCClick the LINK below to read the Chapter
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bV9Q6lZKlfHUTXNaOUB3kk_O5ilh3uCCwxF5wJ-VJ7g/edit?usp=sharing
Comments
Many people complained about the accent, and I will soon rewrite a few scenes to improve Fleur’s dialogue.
Drinor
2024-08-06 09:21:20 +0000 UTCNot a bad story. The writing for fleur speaking was hard to read. I understand that writing an accent isn't the easiest but the Zs in almost random places didn't make it easy. Like the Z replacing the G in gonna. That being said it's still a good story overall.
Chris
2024-08-06 02:13:40 +0000 UTCI'm glad you like it. If you want, you can try to read my other HP story, A Nundu for a Pet.
Drinor
2024-06-16 04:40:03 +0000 UTCI'm already looking forward to the next chapter. Hell, it has been a while since I last read any HP fanfics!
KristofferXxXxX
2024-06-16 00:57:29 +0000 UTCI loved writing their interactions. I’m glad you like it.
Drinor
2024-06-14 07:39:12 +0000 UTCThis is just beautiful. I love how their relationship is developing and their interactions are a delight. You've absolutely nailed them both.
Erinnyes
2024-06-14 02:10:08 +0000 UTCThere will be more chapters of this story. I enjoy writing it.
Drinor
2024-06-13 15:44:32 +0000 UTCPlease Sir can I have some more of this story? This one shouldn't be kept to a short with so much potential.
GhostnKC
2024-06-13 15:37:54 +0000 UTCGlad you like it. Hermione and Fleur will become friends eventually.
Drinor
2024-06-13 13:35:43 +0000 UTCLoved the chapter! Really enjoyed Hermione’s first meeting with Fleur. Hopefully they’ll be friends down the road. Can’t wait for more
TheWateringWizard
2024-06-13 10:00:06 +0000 UTCYeah. I just added a small scene where Harry tells her to call him Harry, and she tells him to call her Fleur.
Drinor
2024-06-13 08:21:38 +0000 UTCWhy does he keep calling her miss ?
Daeron Targaryen
2024-06-12 23:10:26 +0000 UTCThat was amazing
Joker
2024-06-12 19:02:17 +0000 UTCThis was great!
J T
2024-06-12 18:53:16 +0000 UTCI’m glad you like it. In this story, Hermione and Fleur will be friends. Jon and Rhaenyra will seduce Alicent. I have already planned it, and it will be quite entertaining.
Drinor
2024-06-12 17:04:30 +0000 UTCGlad you like it. I enjoy writing it.
Drinor
2024-06-12 17:02:43 +0000 UTCThat was awsome
Elias
2024-06-12 16:45:31 +0000 UTCAnother great chapter! The way your hermione talked to fleur makes way more sense then canon version. You do fleur so well and women in general reading hp it’s like jkr hated women being friends. Hopefully next short story will be the hotd kings landing trio 🤞 because it’s a really interesting premise the trio being close from start would they stop otto viserys etc compared to the one shot where they seduce alicent as a couple
GrouchyGritic
2024-06-12 16:26:00 +0000 UTCI hope you like it.
Drinor
2024-06-12 16:23:40 +0000 UTCThank you for pointing out the mistake.
Drinor
2024-06-12 16:23:29 +0000 UTCThe name is Patronus Charm. The incantation is expecto patronum
Nick K
2024-06-12 16:14:04 +0000 UTCA new story! I can’t wait to get started.
Abdoulaye Sarr
2024-06-12 15:50:36 +0000 UTC
