The Storm Pirates Chapter 63 (Aokiji)
Added 2024-06-02 17:34:21 +0000 UTCClick LINK Below to Read the Chapter
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Comments
of course it's not very read when you RARELY update it and you have like 20 other stories you're working on
Jeremie
2024-08-20 14:11:45 +0000 UTCI like the story, but luffy going full blood thirsty was a little weird
Chason Wright
2024-08-12 22:19:05 +0000 UTCFuture chapters will explain Nojiko’s powers and what her deal is exactly. I hear you about the lemon scenes. Either make them less frequent or shorter.
Drinor
2024-07-10 20:59:26 +0000 UTCI Really like the Story (Reason for Patreon, found it on FF.net). I agree with the "colleague" in regards to the quite frequent lemons, and while I enjoy them as much as any bloke, maybe a little shorter passages. And also, I am some times a little confused with the logic jumps e.g. Nojiko and her powers. I would have liked at least a little POV from her with a kind of explanation how or at least when they came to be.
Daniel Warnecke
2024-07-10 20:51:28 +0000 UTCI will definitely continue it.
Drinor
2024-06-17 16:59:56 +0000 UTCI love this story and woiuld really like you to continue it.
UnlimitedLikes
2024-06-17 16:49:07 +0000 UTCI will make sure to keep updating.
Drinor
2024-06-06 07:23:01 +0000 UTCGlad you like it.
Drinor
2024-06-06 07:22:43 +0000 UTCGlad you like it. Let’s hope Usopp doesn’t make the same mistake again.
Drinor
2024-06-06 07:22:25 +0000 UTCI like this story and hope you keep updating.
Jonathan Whittaker
2024-06-06 06:39:56 +0000 UTCThe story is very interesting. But whatever you decide to do I'll keep reading
Logan Hardin
2024-06-06 03:24:25 +0000 UTCI've been digging this story since the beginning. I like how you handled the Luffy and Usopp drama early on. Keep up the great work
charger2040
2024-06-05 20:02:48 +0000 UTCAnd remember you are a D you never give up
MAEGHT Maxime
2024-06-04 17:44:55 +0000 UTCI understand. I will make sure to update more often.
Drinor
2024-06-04 15:38:46 +0000 UTCI’m glad you like it
Drinor
2024-06-04 15:38:08 +0000 UTCRoger that.
Drinor
2024-06-04 15:37:59 +0000 UTCI will make sure to update as often as I can.
Drinor
2024-06-04 15:32:36 +0000 UTCI personally love his story it's one of the reasons I even became a patrion but I agree the updates are a little slow and would love more story progress
Shadow Mast3r
2024-06-04 00:26:25 +0000 UTCI love this story it is one of my favorites please continue🥺
MAEGHT Maxime
2024-06-03 22:00:32 +0000 UTCI love this story as well, but maybe you can focus a bit less on the steamy scenes. They take up a huge portion of a chapter, and since the frequency of release of a new chapter is low for this story, I think people would rather see the plot progress more than the heavy focus on the harem.
Sankhadeep Dutta
2024-06-03 16:40:57 +0000 UTCI love the story it’s just that the updates are pretty slow so it slips my mind when a new chapter drops
roland octavius
2024-06-03 14:32:23 +0000 UTCGlad you like it
Drinor
2024-06-03 05:44:56 +0000 UTCGood story
Bouttefeux Pierre-yves
2024-06-03 05:44:23 +0000 UTCWow! I’m happy you like it.
Drinor
2024-06-03 05:14:33 +0000 UTCGlad you like it
Drinor
2024-06-03 05:14:10 +0000 UTCI like writing Luffy’s serious scenes since they balance the goofiness.
Drinor
2024-06-03 05:13:59 +0000 UTCI’m happy to hear that. One Piece is still going strong, and I’m still wondering what Imu’s story is.
Drinor
2024-06-03 05:13:15 +0000 UTCI love this story. Personally it's my favorite out of the others lolol. thanks for the two updates. can't wait for the net chapter!
Shadowfox
2024-06-02 23:45:02 +0000 UTCI like the story very much to so I'm good, PS need more updates
jose torres
2024-06-02 23:22:48 +0000 UTCLove the story so far, esp. Luffy's serious attitude growing a bit, since it brings character development. I suggest keep the story going. Hope it brings more attention than it should.
Vic Hops Shaquille
2024-06-02 21:29:43 +0000 UTCI like the story I really enjoy most writings anyways but no keep going with it maybe if you want to make a second or something like that go for it but I'd like to see this story at least continue on in some way it's going to be interesting with how Oda got things going and can't wait to see how you make alterations to it or whatnot but I do like how your Luffy is all three aspects of his personality and he is more of a captain but he's still a goofball so I like the story keep it going
ltibbs
2024-06-02 19:55:17 +0000 UTCI like Aokiji, too. Yeah, Luffy wasn’t in the mood to play any of Foxy’s games. Luffy’s fight with Aokiji will be brutal.
Drinor
2024-06-02 19:29:01 +0000 UTCMy man Aokiji finally enters 🥶(One of my favs)! I love this story i think it going at a good pace (thankyou for handling Foxy quicky:)). Hope it gets more attention! 💛
Denzel Badchkam
2024-06-02 19:23:16 +0000 UTCI’m happy you like the chapter
Drinor
2024-06-02 19:15:58 +0000 UTCSanji : Viola and Charlotte Pudding
Orion Chung
2024-06-02 19:15:32 +0000 UTCZoro : Tashigi, Hiyori, and maybe Perona
Orion Chung
2024-06-02 19:10:22 +0000 UTCLuffy Harem : Nami , Noijko , Vivi, Hancock, Robin , Shirahoshi, Rebecca, Yamato, Uta , and Reiju
Orion Chung
2024-06-02 19:08:00 +0000 UTCI like this story keep going
Orion Chung
2024-06-02 19:02:16 +0000 UTCYup I always loved this story since it brings a new side for Luffy but also I’ve pmed you about it. Can’t wait till I see what you do with the sunny and if you want ideas I have some. Hope you update soon thank you again for good updates I’m glad you update two at a time
Ryusui23
2024-06-02 17:59:47 +0000 UTCChapter 62 explains Nojiko’s powers a little. They are not really explained fully, but her arc has yet to come, and that’s when her powers are fully explained. I’m happy to hear you like the Story.
Drinor
2024-06-02 17:51:54 +0000 UTCI love the story and can’t wait for the next chapters, I think definitely more emphasis on things also, when did Nojiko have a devil fruit again? Or is that a devil fruit? But anyway I can’t wait for more chapters and if you ever need ideas you can pm me cause I follow this story a lot,
Ryusui23
2024-06-02 17:45:23 +0000 UTC
