Dance of The Dragons Chapter 43 (The First Cry of War)
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Kinvara and Daemon’s relationship will be weird, but more will be explained later. Alicent in this story is a mix of the Book and the TV Show. In this story, while she would have wanted to marry Aenar, she enjoys the power a Queen has. I’m sorry for late Reply.
Drinor
2024-07-12 09:44:33 +0000 UTCLaena will play a preeminent role in the story. Kinvara will play more mind games with Aenar’s enemies. I’m sorry for late Reply
Drinor
2024-07-12 09:42:17 +0000 UTCGlad you like the chapter. I’m sorry for late Reply
Drinor
2024-07-12 09:40:01 +0000 UTCI think something between kinvara and daemon will be interesting (at least if you don't make it sour badly cause I like them botha characters). If alicent can keep her father in check she'll be able to better protect her children and her own power (her father doesn't really care about her or her kids anyways just about what he can use them for).
Eva Cole
2024-06-16 02:53:47 +0000 UTCIm just thinking of different situations on if Otto will take a company of his own lap dogs and go to Dragonstone so that they could force their way to Kinvara but knowing her she would use magic to conceal her identity from others as she would want to remain in the shadows. Plus I'm really hoping Laena survives enough to play a key factor in the Dance of Dragons and be the Visenya when Aemon fights the Greens and the Faith from what this stories pointing to at this point
Robert Hernandez
2024-06-08 22:30:47 +0000 UTCThe chapter I'm glad the red priestess is helping out.
Amber
2024-05-31 16:12:02 +0000 UTCHe will eventually tell them about his past life, but it will take a while. Freeing slaves is not really something that will happen much in this story.
Drinor
2024-05-22 14:17:34 +0000 UTCHey idk if I’ve written this before but I just thought it’d be cool if Jon/Aenar decided to honour Dany by liberating slaves. Also he should tell someone like Daemon, Laena and Nyra about his past life they deserve to know
Daemon Targaryen's Noodle Dragon
2024-05-21 23:31:14 +0000 UTCMany of them, but that will be explained more in the next chapter.
Drinor
2024-05-16 18:58:09 +0000 UTCHey drinor did all the king's watch go with aenar and daemon or just almost all?
SkolldreadWolf00
2024-05-16 18:50:07 +0000 UTCI’m glad you like it. Rhaenyra will show more of her Targaryen Heritage.
Drinor
2024-05-16 17:23:03 +0000 UTCBeautiful man can't wait to see how the war goes!
SkolldreadWolf00
2024-05-16 17:21:23 +0000 UTCI'm sure he does and it's gonna work, but he'll need to be smart about it and adaptive. Hannibal tried to fight against Fabian tactics and it didn't work... but Hannibal didn't have dragons, and the prospect of a battlehardened Rhaenyra (and their furious fucking after a battle) really sounds awesome Will Laena mount Vhagar? Cause if she does she can distinguish herself in the war against the Triarchy. Kinvara and Daemon could have a Shiera Seastar type quite early
Longclaw16
2024-05-15 15:12:51 +0000 UTCAenar has already come up with a good strategy to win the war, especially with Dorne. Rhaenyra will finally get her time to shine in this story, but they shouldn’t underestimate Dorne. They are not easily defeated. Daemon and Kinvara will have a thing, and the latter will try to help Daemon move on from his pain.
Drinor
2024-05-15 14:27:05 +0000 UTCAh, the fun begins. I’m sure Aenar and Daemon can gather the support of the Tyrells and Baratheons to invade Dorne while Corlys handles the war at sea. Best option for the latter is to go directly after the Triarchy’s navy in port like how Edward III did at Sluys. For Aenar… he needs to peel some Dornish lords from the Martells. Defeating Fabian tactics will be… difficult. I hope Daemon and Kinvara become lovers. He needs some affection after Lyanna died
Longclaw16
2024-05-15 14:15:05 +0000 UTCGod! Viserys dam weakling!!!
Lily Garcia
2024-05-14 18:03:09 +0000 UTCThere will be more spicy scenes between Rhaenyra and Aenar, especially when Laena joins them. This is not the last time Rhaenys gets humbled.
Drinor
2024-05-14 15:04:31 +0000 UTCNor do I want house Hightower exterminated.
Daeron Targaryen
2024-05-14 14:43:23 +0000 UTCCan’t disagree with you here. Sure I want to see Dorne humbled and conquered but exterminating all of House Martell ? Seems a bit extreme. The Martells alive aren’t even guilty of Oberyn’s crimes as he isn’t even alive.
TheWateringWizard
2024-05-14 14:05:01 +0000 UTCSome heat between Rhae and Aenar, love it ! Can’t wait to see the both of them go off to war and absolutely destroy the Free Cities. And thank you Aenar for this put down of Rhaenys… it was soooo satisfying !
TheWateringWizard
2024-05-14 14:03:20 +0000 UTCAh, so genocide for the crimes of a few members ? Right time to exterminate house Targaryen for the crimes of Maegor.
Daeron Targaryen
2024-05-14 13:10:54 +0000 UTCAenar the annihilator…anyone suspected to have Rhoynar blood was killed
Matt
2024-05-14 13:08:53 +0000 UTCI am all inn for making House Hightower another Gardener (and soon Martell😈)
Loyalist
2024-05-14 12:30:44 +0000 UTCOh, there is someone she can do, and the war can be ended rather swiftly.
Daeron Targaryen
2024-05-14 06:56:45 +0000 UTCCool Title.
Drinor
2024-05-14 06:46:01 +0000 UTCRhaenys will slowly become an ally of Aenar, but that will take some time. I have read a few books about history and whatnot. The War will be quite something, as for Saera. She might make an appearance, but I don’t think there will be much for her to do.
Drinor
2024-05-14 06:45:48 +0000 UTCViserys king of the simps
Kaden Holder
2024-05-14 02:58:06 +0000 UTCPrince Aenar The Black Dragon, Death Made Flesh. Bane of Dorn
BlackFish
2024-05-14 02:15:08 +0000 UTCBut this time they will have some air support
Michael Marquardt
2024-05-14 00:09:33 +0000 UTCI bet baelon is like my mother was right deamon is more like me then I thought
Michael Marquardt
2024-05-14 00:08:37 +0000 UTCAenar the sun dragon
Michael Marquardt
2024-05-14 00:06:10 +0000 UTC❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Loyalist
2024-05-13 23:41:01 +0000 UTCSpare Hightower, but punish Otto… as for Rhaneys maybe she could be a bit more sympathetic when she knows what it’s like to be fucker over by Viserys; as for the free cities it’s time for some good old naval landings like King Richard, also just for fun have Jon bring Saera home so she can speak with Alysanne.
Daeron Targaryen
2024-05-13 22:25:55 +0000 UTCWell, Baelon refused his sister’s advances, Viserra Targaryen, who was said to have been the most beautiful daughter of Alysanne and Jaehaerys. This happened two years after Baelon’s wife died. As for Jaehaerys, despite his flaws, he only ever loved Alysanne. So, neither would approve of Viserys’s actions.
Drinor
2024-05-13 22:14:04 +0000 UTCWhich makes him a better husband than Viserys. Also would Baelon and Jaehaerys be ashamed of Viserys for how he is acting?
Gabe Sarti
2024-05-13 22:06:55 +0000 UTCThe situation in King’s Landing will be explored more, especially with Aenar not being around. Let’s just say the common people won’t be happy. Rhaenyra will get her time to shine in this story, especially with the upcoming War. Daemon still hasn’t fully moved on. That’s why he’s still reluctant to sleep with ladies like Mysaria.
Drinor
2024-05-13 22:04:05 +0000 UTCWar is Coming
Drinor
2024-05-13 21:59:40 +0000 UTCAenar’s plan will be similar to what Daeron did, but he has knowledge that even Dorne doesn’t have. Melisandre won’t appear much in the story. Kinvara is the one Red Priestess that will play a major role.
Drinor
2024-05-13 21:59:28 +0000 UTCAenar’s title will be cool, but let’s wait and see.
Drinor
2024-05-13 21:57:18 +0000 UTCAnd unlike Daeron, Jon has a dragon
Apex Calibre
2024-05-13 21:57:00 +0000 UTCKinvara is not doing all this for Free. But let’s not do spoilers for now.
Drinor
2024-05-13 21:56:40 +0000 UTCAenar will absolutely roast Rhaenys, and not with Dragonfire.
Drinor
2024-05-13 21:55:56 +0000 UTCViserys screwed up badly. The War will be glorious.
Drinor
2024-05-13 21:54:51 +0000 UTCAlicent’s punishment is only just starting. The Hightower will be nothing but a page in the history book by the time Aenar is done. There will definitely be Aenar/Rhaenyra/Laena scenes. 😏
Drinor
2024-05-13 21:54:07 +0000 UTCJon was a big fan of Daeron, but unlike him, he won’t fall for the ‘White Flag.’ BS. Viserys will receive many slaps in the face.
Drinor
2024-05-13 21:50:31 +0000 UTCYeah, Viserys is kinda of a hypocrite. I’m glad you like the chapter.
Drinor
2024-05-13 21:49:21 +0000 UTCCan not wait for war
Andr
2024-05-13 21:10:26 +0000 UTCWow Viserys, so much for loving Aemma. Also I wouldn’t be surprised if everyone insults Alicent behind her back for marrying a man barely a month after his wife died. Viserys truly only cares about himself and will hurt his own family. His father Baelon would be ashamed to see the man he has become. Jaehaerys is probably looking down in the afterlife and saying to himself: “I should have made Aenar the heir.” Rhaenyra has every right to not want anything to do with her father, since he seemed to just move on barely a month after her mother died. It also shows that Daemon truly loved Lyanna since he was in mourning for years after she died. Daemon was truly the better husband. Edit: also can’t wait to see Dorne burn.
Gabe Sarti
2024-05-13 20:44:28 +0000 UTCI hope aenar has better plan than Aegon against dorne, i am for kinvara and Daemon you could also put Melissandre too 😉😇
MAEGHT Maxime
2024-05-13 20:42:40 +0000 UTCI wonder what title he will gain after this event. I hope it’s as cool as Daemon’s “Rogue Prince” title.
roland octavius
2024-05-13 20:42:38 +0000 UTCI don't feel like anything will happen between Kinvara and Daemon but maybe she gets him drunk enough then she does some weird magic on him thinking she's Lyanna later in the story
Robert Hernandez
2024-05-13 20:40:16 +0000 UTCKinvara and Daaemon!?...interesting
Dietro981
2024-05-13 20:35:31 +0000 UTCI can’t wait to see more of Aenar snubbing Rhaenys 😭
roland octavius
2024-05-13 20:33:44 +0000 UTCOhhh Viserys, you are so weak, such a disappointment. ohh, Nyra and Aenar are doing bedroom stuff, nice. Can’t wait to see Aenar in the war.
maxime bégin
2024-05-13 20:33:37 +0000 UTCI admit that I don’t feel a gram of pity for Alicent. She made her bed and she will pay the consequences of playing the game against dragons. She is her father daughter, no doubt about it. Even the way Otto said it!!!! “And heir of House Hightower” 🤬 Usurper will get what is he deserves Rise as high as you want Otto, when you fall you will take the all Hightower down with you!!!!! Can’t wait for Dorne to burn🔥. This will be a nice view for wannabe traitors. Loved the scene between Rhaenyra and Aenar ❤️❤️❤️ Hope to see more of them in the future, maybe in the company of Laena😉 Personally I wouldn’t mind some Kinvara x Daemon moments If not love (that depends on how you write them), he surely deserves some companionship
Loyalist
2024-05-13 20:29:48 +0000 UTCAenar/Jon should use Daeron I’s strategy on Dorne. If he can conquer Dorne thats a slap in the face towards Viserys
Apex Calibre
2024-05-13 20:27:21 +0000 UTCMan loved the chapter and what a stupid prick, telling a lass he loves her not even weeks after his wife dies
JayFireblood
2024-05-13 20:26:16 +0000 UTC
