Larita's presentation
Added 2020-08-05 09:01:28 +0000 UTCI wanna put my girl with a wild imagination on the spotlight a bit more. Totally not based on a fantasy I had, nope.
Never done a comic properly so I need to figure out how to aproach this.
Any feedback is really appreciated :)
Comments
Very good art moonie, I’m sure everyone would love to see more of your short story ideas.
Brandon
2020-08-06 06:04:33 +0000 UTClooks good, i think for a short little comic, it gets the job done, and does it well. im always a fan of comics that write in the text vs using a text box after-work, because it seems more hand-crafted. though i think that may just be me being a weird-ass. but this does well. i think it would do real well if you finished it, but also has its charm on its own right now. If anything, for the SUPER horny people, maybe more detailed porn stuff, as it seems "soft", no penetration, no real private showing (besides the penis-figures), but again, personally, i think its great.
Rabbit
2020-08-05 09:05:08 +0000 UTC
