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[Comic] Page 12
Added 2019-02-12 06:11:43 +0000 UTCTime for a much needed pose change. I've also changed Dolly's bedroom to a less drab color scheme; in the final version, previous pages will be edited to reflect this.
Drove myself slightly insane trying to get that last panel to look right. TBH it still looks really weird to me, but at this point I can't tell if I've just been staring at it for too long or what. Time to press on regardless.
See everything so far here: https://www.patreon.com/jamorbital/posts?tag=Comic
Comments
Dolly's absolutely right. It is getting hot in here!
Varian Lee
2019-02-15 04:44:49 +0000 UTCThe last panel is quite good, but I think I can see what was driving you nuts. I can't tell if it's the angle or the proportions , but Luna's abdomen is a lot shorter than it should be in the last panel. When you compare her abdomen in the first and last panel they look very different.
Jon Whitehead
2019-02-12 22:19:38 +0000 UTCLoving the colors here! Dig the various shades of pink and blue, both for the room and also for Dolly's underwear. Excited to see some spanking!
vasily26
2019-02-12 16:33:43 +0000 UTCSpanking time :D
2019-02-12 11:03:31 +0000 UTCAbsolutely GORGEOUS! Its been echoed a couple of times but I gotta say it again - Luna and Dolly's expressions in this comic have been seriously incredible. Phenomenal in every sense of the word!
Flargo
2019-02-12 06:57:51 +0000 UTCBoth, of course 👀
jam-orbital
2019-02-12 06:13:23 +0000 UTCWhat comes next? Wand vibrator or spanking? XD
lucipher1
2019-02-12 06:12:49 +0000 UTC
