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Delirium first release -Prologue-

Edit: I made this one, because the edit mode of the page don't work fine for me, thank you very much for all coments of the other post, and thanks to RedUnit10 for the grammar correction!! Know I told you the next week, but I lied at purpose :P Here is the Prologue of Delirum. Just let me tell you some things... First one: The game is translated by ...myself -_-¿ if you see some phrase, word, or expression so wrong, just tell me and I'll change as soon as possible. Don't worry, in the final version of the game I'll make a profesional revision, but for this one, we could need wait a pair of weeks or more, and well , I think the text is more or less understandable. Second one: The Prologue just have 2 hentai pictures, but with some variations, hope you like it! Third: The game have a mac and a win version, if you need the linux version just tell me. At first I upload here the game, but the site bugged or something, so I just put here the links for you can download :S my apologizes for the repost! LINKS: http://www.mediafire.com/download/clhsgeegupkkt2k/PROLOGUE+WIN.zip http://www.mediafire.com/download/x037ch3w4q0x9bq/PROLOGUE+MAC.zip Thank you so much for your support!

Delirium first release -Prologue-

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Hi Conner, is not automatically, I just send the link of the game that day more or less. I guess you must have the game link in the messsages section by the way. Let me know if you have more questions.

Nikraria

So, just to be super clear because I'm the kind of person who needs things explained to them, how the release dates work is you send out links to the game download on the fifth day of every month, after us Patreons have already submitted our donations. Ergo, the next 'release date' should be August 5th? I'm only asking because I'm new to Patreon and still kinda confused at how the whole thing works. I'm wondering if it's a kind of thing where I'd have to contact you before hand if I wanted a link to download the game, or if it's a kind of thing where the link is automatically sent out to every donating Patreon?

Coghunter

Amazing start! I love it!

silvarius2000

I'll try my best in complete this game :D Hope you like it the final result!

Nikraria

And thus we come to why, We all love Cthullu, or well... When Nikraria draws the od "zombie, tentacle, possoised,monster" Stuff we all love from. "Stroke of Madness" Gave it a run and i love it all ready. I missed playing games like yours Nikra

Spookems

Thanks for tell us Kindly Demon, In fact, RedUnit sent me a new revision text, but wtih your permission I'll change the text when I'll upload the first three missions. By the way, the line in spanish is fix it yet. My apologizes for that ladies and gentlemen! Thanks again Kindly Demon!

Nikraria

Indeed, Patreon can be a bit "buggy" (per se.....). This is my third attempt to post this. Anyroads, thanks is indeed greatly due to RedUnit10's efforts to provide you with more clear, concise, and correct lines of English grammar and spelling, and these changes have mostly come through with great success in this version of your "Delirium - Prologue". However, Bella Lee's line ("A la gente extraña que deambala por ahi") still has not come across in its English translation, and there are still a good many typos and bumpy areas of text which still need your attention before publication of your final product. Other than these, I am largely happy with how this project of yours is coming along..... :)

Kindly Demon

The simply correction help me a lot, but if you want, (and obviously if you not waste time to other important thing) go ahead! But man, take the time you need, I don' like the time I need for make this visual novel, but we have months before to finish :S Thanks as usual RedUnit10!!

Nikraria

I'm going to have another go through the dialogue to make sure I didn't miss anything, that way I'll have some of the script already edited for the upcoming full release. To make matters easier for you, I'll include every line of dialogue as to keep the context easier to follow. Most of the changes are pretty easy to see, but it's just one extra thing I can do to help.

Joseph


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