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Added 2019-05-31 16:50:04 +0000 UTCHello everybody. I hope you've had a good week :). New chapters are up, let me know what you think!
Next ones likely Friday in a week, I'll let you know if anything comes up.
Cheers and a good weekend to everyone!
Comments
Thanks for the feedback. I know people like different stuff in a story like this and I'm simply trying to balance it a little. Let me know what you think as it progresses :).
G. Harthane
2019-06-03 10:50:42 +0000 UTCThis part definitely slows down a bit compared to the revenge / war stuff before. Let me know what you think as it progresses :). Thanks for the feedback.
G. Harthane
2019-06-03 10:49:37 +0000 UTCThanks for the suggestions and the feedback. I'll add a break when I come to it and a conversation in between the training. I remember I wanted to get to some action when I wrote it :).
G. Harthane
2019-06-03 10:48:16 +0000 UTCGreat book I can't wait till she is traveling alone and kicking ass and getting stupid strong while doing it all.
Jonathan Walker
2019-06-03 00:37:05 +0000 UTCLove your story. I really enjoy the resistance training arcs, because it shows us interesting methods other classes use as offense. I am also eager to see what 3rd level Ash Creation does. Also, in response to the lack-of-plot opinions, we just went through three large plots arcs (Tristan's family and revenge, the war, and Edwin revenge). It makes sense that there will be a calmer training arc before the next thing, especially since Ilea has repeatedly thought about getting stronger before tackling Golden Lily.
Neal OHara
2019-06-01 03:10:56 +0000 UTCThe only criticism I have for this week is that the story felt like it wasn't progressing as far as I was hoping. This gave the impression of a very long single chapter since it was all about preparation for whatever she is doing next.
Corwin Amber
2019-06-01 02:21:05 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapters! This week felt a little weak. Especially the first chapter was quite confusing with the sudden jump to the evaluation and the second chapter is missing a double line break in the time skip. Might flow a little better with the previous ones if read in one go, but the week interruption made it weird at first. Still enjoyable though, the resistance training makes Ilea´s current psyche quite clear.
Baba Vader
2019-06-01 00:29:44 +0000 UTC
