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Added 2018-11-15 16:44:20 +0000 UTCHey all.
First of all new chapters out. Changes to POVs in general and the changes between them (I'll mark them better so that mobile readers won't have the issue of paragraphs not showing up).
The two chapters were mostly written before last week's feedback but I'll definitely take into consideration what you have said. Thank you all for the feedback (but do you not have phones???). Seriously though, thanks. I do hope I can improve the quality of my writing as time goes on. I do apologize if the latest chapters have been disappointing for some of you.
Now I was half sick and working all week and tomorrow I'll be out of town for the weekend. Next chapters thus next week on Saturday. I have some cool things planned for Ilea and co. (50 chapter POV change of Claire caring for the elderly in Vihal and some Kyrian and Demon buddy cop action).
Let me know what you think.
Oh and additionally the advance chapters for 7$ changes to 16, 4$ to 12 and 2$ stays at 8.
Comments
"(but do you not have phones???)" - I do but I don't have your phone number yet!
Deinos
2018-11-21 09:36:36 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapters!
Baba Vader
2018-11-17 11:33:37 +0000 UTCOr give a skill a different mechanic after an evolution. Skill 1 pushes the mana into the enemy with each attack and skill 2 ignites the mana and deals massive damage. Skill 2 could also work on enemies having a manapool, using a part of their own mana against them :D
Endoria
2018-11-16 14:30:01 +0000 UTCDunno if you like people chucking ideas at you, or where a good forum for those ideas is, but what if Ilea started targeting specific spots when she pushed her Mana into people. You know, "healing can be destruction yada yada". Give her the old five finger exploding palm technique.
Gardor
2018-11-15 21:32:19 +0000 UTCOh yeah that's the ticket put Eve in a travelling band that solves mysteries too, that's why we're here.
Gardor
2018-11-15 21:30:10 +0000 UTC
