Cartwright and Tenner - Case 1 - Update 2
Added 2021-10-02 17:12:01 +0000 UTCCartwright and Tenner is a choose your own adventure mystery horror comic in which you the audience can suggest actions for the main characters to partake as they investigate their cases.
To suggest an action, all you need to do is comment on the patreon post about what they should do! Feel free to be as detailed as you want! If you make a long post, try to provide a summary in a similar vein to something like this:
- "Action: [Investigate] X"
- "Action: [Talk] to X about Y"
- "Action: [Pick up] X"
- "Action: [Cast] X"
Feel free to comment , suggest actions and speculate, I am very intrigued to see how this will be received!
The idea is that I will be trying to do updates to this comic once every two-three weeks, patrons getting access to the comic a week early to the public. I will be making roughly 10-15 panels per update to avoid overwhelming my work load.
Also to note, I am considering throwing in patron cameos as this series hopefully continues, such as witnesses, clients, etc! These appearances won't be controllable by patrons, but will be characters in the story for you all interact with. With permission given, the patron appearance and aesthetics will be adapted into the appropriate look for the setting of the comic.
I hope people enjoy the ride, Cartwright and Tenner's fates are in your hands.
Comments
I still can't get over how dang good all the art here is <3 The backgrounds are all so well made with excellent details and perspectives. I've probably left it a little too long to comment myself, but that's fine, I'm not sure I can think of anything interesting anyway hahaha. Cartwright & Tenner : Every second counts, now you have a good idea of what has taken Bo quickly grab some supplies; salt from the cupboard, a powerful memento of Bo, and go check out the blood trail by the ruble while its still fresh, see how far that can take you. However, IF you need a power-source for items that can make the commune spell, maybe it would be better to try it on that old apple mac/boombox? Ask the spirits who has taken Bo, their desires, what they'll do to him.
Crowbar
2021-10-11 05:38:16 +0000 UTCWanted to do a spelly thing but i think it can wait till we know more. For now it seems like there is;t much left we can do here. Tenner: Check out Bo's computer. We know theres a possession going on, but maybe there was a place of importance he could be headed. Assuming the demon isn't in full control, we may be able too discern a location(if not it's ritual time next update BAYBEE)
Yulen
2021-10-10 01:56:16 +0000 UTCTenner: Talk to branson about what other potential things he will see with this sight. and maybe continue this charming introduction tenner so graciously gave in the way only tenner can. but i do agree that i think we've gleaned a fair amount from inside already. it might soon be time to try and follow the trail left by what we have now figured might be a very possessed bo. something that caused this much destruction can't have been very delicate at all.
Tagmer
2021-10-07 21:15:50 +0000 UTCI think we don't have enough reason to cast another ritual at this point in time, we know that Bo was possessed, and most likely the reason for the strong emotions. We now need to find Bo and rescue him so I say they should go outside and investigate to see if they can figure out where Bo went
Monu
2021-10-05 18:07:46 +0000 UTCTenner: ask about the zoloft and ambien to Branson, who's taking them, when did they start taking them and who gave them.
Lyserg Ludenberg
2021-10-04 18:19:05 +0000 UTCAction ask Branson if he noticed any changes in himself after Bo gave him that necklace. Did you happen to see improvement in baseball, or maybe just general strength? I have a sneaking suspicion that the necklace has some kinda magic attached to it. Maybe Bo gave it to him to either help him with base ball, or maybe some kinda love magic to increase the probability of a relationship. Also introduce tenner to Branson obviously XD (plus if he gives an introduction I feel like we can find out what exactly tenner is like, "yes this is my partner Tenner, he is a _____"
Monu
2021-10-03 17:37:07 +0000 UTCWeird thought- did Bo take Branson's necklace because he was afraid it would lead the Demon to him?
Robert Smith
2021-10-02 17:40:14 +0000 UTCACTION - Cartwright, talk to Branson about exam on Monday. Maybe if we know what the exam is, we can figure out where Bo was studying etc for it. And the possibly much longer one- ACTION- Tenner, investigate the Demon's path to the bed - possibly with a tracking ritual, if such exists? It feels like if the tin was closed in a hurry, and Bo was maybe writing a confession, something triggered his desire to do this. Did the Demon follow Bo home from the library? And if so, maybe that is where Bo is going now, to hunt down whatever set the Demon on him? Perhaps by tracking the route of the Demon might be a way to find Bo - if that requires a tracking ritual, it might be worth using it
Robert Smith
2021-10-02 17:33:57 +0000 UTCAs fun as it would be to see Tennor play with his new friend, it might be time to leave and investigate the rubble outside.
Lee Evergreen
2021-10-02 17:21:30 +0000 UTCA new mechanic has been introduced! I will post a list of known rituals that Cartwright and Tenner can perform at a later date to help you all. You can certainly suggest or improvise a potential ritual that they might use though, i'm not discouraging it~ Take Cartwright's warning though, use too many rituals at once in a short amount of time, or taking more risky rituals might lead to unfavourable consequences. Their fates are in your hands.
Glaz
2021-10-02 17:21:28 +0000 UTC
