What do you think would be more helpful in presenting these ideas?
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It might help to break this up into a series and go into more detail with each step. As it is now, I can follow along, but I'm not as familiar with a lot of the authors you reference as you are. Something I really like about advanced textbooks and older works of non-fiction is that in the foreword they will state what they assume the reader to already be familiar with ("We only assume the reader is already proficient in calculus." etc.)