Robert_Hart

Improving the 'blurb' for "Through my Eyes. Again."

Added 2021-06-08 08:11:38 +0000 UTC

I've been running adverts on Amazon for "Through my Eyes. Again." (which sounds expensive but isn't as you only pay for clicks). My ads have been seen nearly 1000 times and have been clicked on 5 times generating 1 sale. I want to try to increase the click rate and thus the purchase rate with a better blurb. The 'average' rate is about 10 click per 1000 views.

I've had some feedback that the blurb should be spiced up a bit - so here is my latest version. I'd love to hear from you what you think - and any suggestions you have.

On the writing front, TDE Chapter 10 is about 2/3 done. I had to chop nearly 1000 words from the chapter last weekend, unfortunately, as I realised the characters were leading me into a corner. But I've picked up the thread and wrote about 1000 words in replacement. Unfortunately, the end of semester is upon me with its attendant marking and reporting, so my writing time will be curtailed. Then I'm supposed to be travelling to Melbourne for a week to see my son and his family - but that is a bit doubtful as they are in lock-down after Covid escaped from quarantine. We'll have to wait and see if I'm allowed to travel there.

So - I've decided to suspend payments for the next month. Thank you for your interest and patience!

Robert
Brisbane, Australia