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Title test

Sorry, treating you like a test audience today. Is this an improvement?

Comments

I actually liked the earlier box better

Chin Eva

Much more readable. I think I also prefer not having titles at all, though.

Felix Flames

Removing the border and background makes more work (text color changes for contrast) but helps immensely with the look. Great change.

Joshua Holt

I love it, more context.

Sarah

Team "No Text at all, please, because part of the fun is to figure out who is who!" here!

Mario Sixtus

I agree with this. There's something to be said for figuring things out from the context clues, your own knowledge, and/or your ability to do research.

Sara A Fox

Dissenting voice here -- I like trying to figure out exactly who everyone is over the course of a few viewings -- like the delight when I first realized that Sisyphus was Sisyphus. Laika was Laika.

Rachel R

I think if the text was in a floating box that had a bit of motion, or faded in and out with a wiggle as the character spoke, might fit the style better. but i like the idea.

Pyrs

I prefer the location on screen for sure. That way I can check there if I don’t recognize a character but focus on the interviews without getting distracted if I’m up to speed.

Eden Kawka

I was ok with the groovy font. But the more conventional font seems well more conventional for ironic subtitles. you want the attention on the content not the font so this is an improvement.

Charles Eubanks

I like the fact that they are less distracting. I thought it worked really well.

Scott Morizot

Just the name thing in the top right.

the forest Jar

Yeah that would be my ideal, but I'm trying to keep it away from where the captions will go.

the forest Jar

I don't get what changed...

TeufelSzeuG

I would think something in the lower third of the screen, like traditional news coverage.

Neal Seidman

I feel like the original ones fit the overall style of the cartoon better.

Juan Chanco

Love it.

T34mki11

I like them. May I suggest that you have different titles for the same character (perhaps, 5 for each one) that you could randomly or something similar?

Rodrigo Espinosa Huerta

Actually yeah! Much better except for the white tiny words, it gets lost in the background so its a bit hard to read. But I like the fonts and transition effect. More aesthetic and less on ur face.

Adara


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