人畜レンタル風俗店で3Pした後 After a threesome at a human livestock rental sex shop
Added 2025-09-17 08:40:10 +0000 UTC
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You don't see this amount of criticism on other nsfw artists because fest has a whole concept, not just a few characters, and it has huge potential to make great stories. Yet we get a sample of a story, and go to the next sample after. When is that satisfying?
Uragan
2025-09-19 20:55:21 +0000 UTC
I love this! Hope Fest makes a longer version eventually, but this is a new hot fantasy to jerk off to.
Wild fantasy
2025-09-19 19:43:23 +0000 UTC
Although this is very good story but still when it too short it doesn’t explain really well why she is the only one with gag or might at least show how she try to rub off the temp tattoo to the staff of something result getting the real number tattoo or might even having the human lifestock with the real 1024 number came back and saw her place taken and then she took of with the girl belonging. A lot of potential lost here.
nt.mk
2025-09-18 17:20:18 +0000 UTC
At my first qick read of the first two panels i was very confused for a second untill i got that the translation had they insted of she
thats one of the most common translation errors i see they and she or she and him (not just the most common thing i notice with Fests translations but generally)
But it was way less the last 1-2 months i think
Nik19
2025-09-18 00:29:11 +0000 UTC
I criticise it becaus i really like Fests works and just wish he would't just dump this short 1 page storys but take more time to flesh them out better
We see he can do amazing storys if he makes them a bit longer even if it takes a bit more time
To criticise something isn't always bad, more often than not it can be really important to give your critecism
I think the story has potential but sadly its over befor i could even really get into it and thats the big problem with all his 1 page storys (with very few exeptions maybe)
They also often lack context or aren't that well thought out (wich is kinda hard if you have only 1 page)
I don't see my criticisem as mean
I like Fests work and see what he can do if he uses more than 1 page for his works
If your bothert that much by my critecism you don't have to read my comments, im not forcing you
You can write me what you like so much about this 1 page story and trie to convince me if you want
Nik19
2025-09-18 00:22:12 +0000 UTC
Agreed, the comments in basically every post are really critical and demanding, especially for shorter posts. There's a lot of very backhanded statements that pretend to be constructive but are just whining about what they didn't get.
I'm just excited to see what Fest want's to make and hope they enjoy working on each post.
StrayB0t
2025-09-18 00:16:44 +0000 UTC
With Fests record of actually expanding on 1 page storrys your hope is in vain
Nik19
2025-09-17 23:59:15 +0000 UTC
I think it coul actually have been kinda nice if we actually had gotten to see at least a little how they used her (the sex doll)
Nik19
2025-09-17 23:56:36 +0000 UTC
I wonder what it is with people being over-critical over Fest's stories. I never see this with other NSFW creators.
This short story is great.
I hope Fest never gets discouraged with the mean comments, he should keep drawing how he likes.
RileyInkTheCat
2025-09-17 22:32:55 +0000 UTC
Judging from the title, you're right. He came with her for a threesome with a livestock, and pfanked her with a tattoo. Agreed on the rest.
Uragan
2025-09-17 21:34:13 +0000 UTC
you spend more time trying to understand the premise than actually enjoying it.
Uragan
2025-09-17 21:33:10 +0000 UTC
*sigh*
Great concept wasted on a 1-picture long story, like always. No introduction, no conclusion. Fast-paced, unsatisfying, frustrating.
Next.
Uragan
2025-09-17 21:32:20 +0000 UTC
Question for everyone
Is there a 1 page story from Fest you actually like (you can give muliple ones)
I don't mean like the premiss is great and you wish it would be longer but really just this 1 page story is amazing like it is?
Nik19
2025-09-17 14:08:31 +0000 UTC
This has so much potential, hope to see it expanded. I love the vaginal and anal seal to mark them as used.
drew
2025-09-17 13:54:32 +0000 UTC
This one could be one of the best, but its really to short and a bit confusing
Corsa115
2025-09-17 11:32:35 +0000 UTC
1. I think she was there with the guy and he wrote the number on her as a joke but im not 100% if im right
If yes i think a pannel where we see hem holding a pen or him sribbeling on her wouuld have been very nice
2. I wonder why shes the only one with that mouth gag mask
3. As it started getting really interesting it just ended
im devestated and disapointed without messure
I just wanted more T-T