After-hours 37 p5 up, what's next?
Added 2024-01-12 18:28:27 +0000 UTCleave your ideas below, give a like to those you're ok with :D
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I like it! Maybe have bonnie patting Mary on the butt when she proposes the *fun*? It would help get Mary's motor running x) Also what if we have a panel or two of Monica and her cheeks gaining more jiggly momentum? Showing that she's getting up speed and add some "Oh no!" tension to Bonnie and Marry's antics?
Thestooge
2024-01-12 18:45:37 +0000 UTCImma copypaste the idea i posted last time cuz i think its still good, and should provide enough action for the next page. " how about Bonnie is the first to have her neuron activated. seeing Mary stand on the pedals and sway up n down a meter from her face has her motor going. So she has a plan. Bonnie slows down to a halt. and we only see her from Mary's PoV, as she looks back and sees bonnie stopped in the distance, shuffling around her bike, but she's too far to notice exactly what's goin on. Mary would be concerned. Is everything okay? did she got a flat tire? Despite being in a competition, she wouldn't want anything bad happen to her. Plus she'd want to compete fair and square with bonnie. Like goku wanting his adversaries to be in top shape before a combat. "Boooonnie, is something wrong??" she'd shout from afar. Bonnie would only get on the saddle again, and pedal back towards mary. Bonnie would make an excuse like "My chain fell of i just put it back on, thanks for waiting for me miss mary! You're a good sport." To which Mary would reply that she wants a fair competition with her, of course. Absolutely nothing to do with wanting to see her in her jorts. They'd continue riding side by side. Bonnie proposes something to Mary. "Like, Monica was right you know? maybe we should have *fun* for once. Monica is neeeever gonna catch up to us, right? So what do you say you and I take it easy, enjoy the riiiide, and on the last kilometer, you and I race to the finish line." Mary would be elated at the idea. A chill ride with her carrot friend?? hell yeah. That's when Mary and Bons go over a bump on the road. Mary goes "Ooph!" and Bonnie goes "Aaaahhhh....", then blushes and looks away. Mary looks back at bonnie with a suspicious smirk. "...what was that?" asks Mary. Bonnie realizes she's been caught, so she gets in front of Mary, pushes her hips forward, revealing she's been riding a dildo tied to her seat for a while now "...I'm having fun. W-what about you?""
Kenno Arkkan
2024-01-12 18:32:02 +0000 UTC
