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AH33 p3 up, what's next?

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AH33 p3 up, what's next?

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I think there was :v its patreon's patron manager being bad at its job again. it should filter out ppl whose pledges haven't been processed yet. siiiigh

Kenno Arkkan

I'm sorry, from the wording of your Idea I thought there was gonna be a short time skip with them having collected the wood and getting the fire started. I admit I should've had something were it says "Fel gets back exhausted, reporting a few things but no danger" My bad 👋 Also I did get sent the link and password for the pages and I did read them. Was there some error that sent me them early?

Thestooge

@thestooge fel literally left the scene by the end of this page. I think you should actually read the pages before suggesting ideas my dude, and that would require you to wait for your pledges to be processed first, sine you just joined the patreon campaign 🤷‍♂️

Kenno Arkkan

Its an idea that was discussed in the previous post Idea https://imgur.com/gallery/sV6uUKC it wont lead to a sex scene, it will just be showcasing the current standing with both of them to the reader, before actually getting down to the banging, later on in the comic.

Kenno Arkkan

maybe its too much extra info, but what if Fel volunteered to scout as a way to give bonnie and al some alone time? I could imagine Bonnie still being a little coy about openly flirting with Al when Fel is around. Since this is a new kind of relationship between the three.

MizaruSketch

I guess this could be a chance to contrast between this and the last comic where Bonnie was trying to get Al to make a move. This time Al wouldn't hesitate to go for it with a flirty comment or a pat on her butt.

MizaruSketch

Feels like a setup for some Bonnie/Al but that's kinda against the original prompt. Maybe it's some Bonnie thoughts about if they should do anything? Ultimately missing the chance as Fel comes back. Could open up a AH14-like scene where Al and Fel are going at it and Bonnie's pretending to be asleep. Fel knowing better and telling her to have some confidence for her training the next day.

Mr Ru

I'm thinking Both Bonnie and Fel could blow on the fire, TWO JIGGLY ASSES in Aldo's face! Before that maybe Fel is a little tired from scouting, she yawns and scratches her butt, which also pulls down her leggings exposing her buttcrack, giving Aldo an even greater view when they blow on the fire. Maybe their butts could be lit by the pale mOOn light. Fel's white booty fur would be perfect for that!

Thestooge

I was thinking the next page could start with the bonfire starting already. You know how you have to blow air into it so it spreads more? Kinda like ollie here in the main comic https://i.imgur.com/H1uN7mv.png Well i was thinking aldo could be doing that, then lose his breath. So bonnie "naturally" would try to help, so she'd kneel in front of him (ass pointing to his face of course) and blow at the fire too.

Kenno Arkkan


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