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After-hours 28 page 1 and 2 up! what's next?

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After-hours 28 page 1 and 2 up! what's next?

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I do like this concept as well, I feel like it's a good follow up from the idea I had and a solid one for page 4.

Bigweld

D: i just thought it made sense. The red eyes are still after them. They think he's weak. If he's exposed then the entire den is.

Kenno Arkkan

Thanks! I wanted a similar aesthetic but without lineart cuz i need a break from it xd so b/w with gradient maps it is.

Kenno Arkkan

I think since Alpha is right there it'd make sense for her to confront 'mr. wolfy' now. She asks him to talk in private. "I'll show this thing (phone) to him and see how he reacts. If he panics, I'll know it's his!" Since it's a costume, Alpha can't read his emotions and assumes he has no idea what the phone is. So she asks him to help her find out who it belongs to. He is super popular around the den so he would have no problem getting close to the girls and asking questions. From there Alpha will send him on a wild goose chase to find the 'spy' among them. There's his excuse to be alone with some of the girls and bone em.

MizaruSketch

Those colors looks so nice!

MizaruSketch

Wish it didn't mention him being explicitly blocked from leaving. Old idea for the series ending was he could have left at any time but just thought he couldn't because of a guard or something.

Mr Ru

I think he goes looking for his phone as Sirclicks mentioned, but starting so from where he's at in the Cafeteria. Starts by checking a few benches and across the tables, seeing some of the bunny gals chew on some carrots a bit flirtatiously before he goes looking under the tables to no luck before someone's THICK THIGHS manage to grip onto his head, in a teasing or a pulling him forward to their crotch in a. "Looking for something to eat or just saying hello~?" Before he nervously declines and tries his best to get free to keep looking.

Bigweld

I think next page should have him desperately looking for his phone all over the den. Searching high and low all over the place.

SirClicks


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