"What's the next after-hours comic gonna be about?" post!
Added 2018-03-10 00:48:36 +0000 UTC As usual, leave your ideas in the comments below, then give ❤'s to all the ideas you're ok with.
Last comic took us 4 months to finish, so say, if you want something summer themed, now might be the time to start working on it :D
Some pointers for successful story ideas:
- Think of a story's beginning and ending, that's usually the best way to figure out where to go. we can work the middle as we go.
More complex, cohesive ideas usually get voted up. - Make sure to suggest which characters (and versions, futa/standard/genderbend etc) would be involved. "Pizza orgy" sounds alright but it could mean different things with different characters for different people.
- If possible, suggest how the first one or two pages would look like, that gives me a reference to start the comic with. These pages usually introduce the characters, the setting, and the tone of the story.
- Length can vary, but we like 10-12 page-long stories. Under the new schedule I suppose it's gonna take us 2 months or so to finish a story that long. If you can think of a long ass story like the island one, it would be neat to divide it into chapters.
- Pls don't let the thought of "oh nobody is gonna vote for this" to stop you. I rather have -some- ideas than none xD
- Shorter stories are welcome too! 1-3 pages are totally doable. We just need a solid story or motif to have the toons bang eachother, as usual.
Vote ends by Monday 19th at 8pm mexico city time, the winner will be announced then. In case of a tie, I'll call a tiebreaker on Tuesday.
here are some old posts in case you wanna revisit old ideas, just copypaste em in this post
https://www.patreon.com/posts/ideas-for-next-14856332
https://www.patreon.com/posts/what-is-next-be-11776423
https://www.patreon.com/posts/whats-next-after-8827074
https://www.patreon.com/posts/whats-next-after-8125655
happy thinking :O
Comments
Cool!
Thestooge
2018-03-21 01:17:29 +0000 UTCalrighty, mizaru's MGS3 idea wins <a href="https://i.imgur.com/5NEipXr.png" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://i.imgur.com/5NEipXr.png</a> Snake eater it is
Kenno Arkkan
2018-03-20 02:55:05 +0000 UTCLooks like it's almost time! :)
Thestooge
2018-03-20 00:51:43 +0000 UTCOh! and spankings!
Thestooge
2018-03-12 13:29:05 +0000 UTCAnd Before they do any fucking, they could have jiggle/bounce tests, and measurements, and a deflecting quarter tests, etc!
Thestooge
2018-03-12 13:28:14 +0000 UTCSo much yes for this idea
Arukath Hellsaint
2018-03-11 23:24:15 +0000 UTCDefenitly have a few cutaway panels establishing thier bootys!
Thestooge
2018-03-11 07:31:28 +0000 UTCTHAT IS BRILLIANT
Thestooge
2018-03-11 01:03:08 +0000 UTCthe ridiculousness of this idea makes me think it could be structured like an episode of MTV cribs mixed with a reality show. Just straight up 4th wall breaking, with aldo walking around like a camera is following him, cutting to a waist-up shot of each gal, sitting in a couch with a legend undernead like "Green: The bubbliest butt" as they each describe why they think their ass is better. Only to go back to Al groping/eating out/fucking/etc each girl right afterwards. It would have to be a comic that knows just how goofy it is and own it.
Kenno Arkkan
2018-03-11 00:59:30 +0000 UTCMaybe for the first page we could have an introduction by the original afterhourser, Mugger. Sitting in an armchair by a fire, wearing a smoking jacket and talking about how far the series has gone and stuff.
Mr Ru
2018-03-10 11:36:03 +0000 UTCAnother one could be a followup to AH10's ending <a href="https://i.imgur.com/5eZU2xy.png" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://i.imgur.com/5eZU2xy.png</a> Just the bun getting that double trouble. Gives us a chance to look at more mature muggs and alex too
Kenno Arkkan
2018-03-10 04:59:45 +0000 UTCAnother one could be a followup to after-hours 20 with felix and alice. They could hit the hotel's club at night all dolled up and do it with the douchebags. Heck, Felix could be in a sundress and pass for a girl. The good douche could be like "If its pretty fuck it".
Kenno Arkkan
2018-03-10 04:47:45 +0000 UTCI like this. One could be about Pawsy getting it on the island story <a href="https://i.imgur.com/qxiHeT3.jpg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://i.imgur.com/qxiHeT3.jpg</a>
Kenno Arkkan
2018-03-10 04:39:30 +0000 UTCBeen having this idea for a collection called 'After Minutes', with short little scenarios that only take 1-2 pages (or one wide page?). No worries of setup and little to no dialogue. Just stuff people suggest happen. Could be anything but maybe to give it some structure, scenes could be based on past AH issues. Sorta like <a href="http://kennoarkkan.tumblr.com/post/163658409201/" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://kennoarkkan.tumblr.com/post/163658409201/</a> but with more frames. Scenes that were timeskipped or left as cliffhangers or just the same characters doing more. Since it would be the 25th issue, it could like a recap of things.
Mr Ru
2018-03-10 04:06:37 +0000 UTCGreen starring in: Snake Eater. A Metal Gear Solid 3 parody. Plot Summary: A truncated/simplified version of the MGS 3 videogame with Green in the role of Naked Snake.No weapons, food, clothes or smartphone. She is completely naked as her name implies. This is a stealth mission. Fucking her way through the Cobra Unit to get to a final showdown with the Boss. The mentor who betrayed her and the den. First page could be Green parachuting into the forest with Alex providing exposition on the mission/the Boss is a traitor and short intel on all the Cobra Unit members Green will have to fuck. This leads directly into the first mission aka The Pain. The Pain: Either Fel or Mugger since they have the biggest dicks. The Queer: the bald gay dude Michael. Unable to be seduced by women. The Rear End: Monica with Hooty the owlgirl taking place of the parrot. Hooty watches over Monica as she naps. The Furry: a guy overheating in a furry costume with a broken zipper. The same guy from a previous AH, Mr. Wolfy. Leader of the FOX Unit: Alex of course. Providing information to Green throughout the story via that classic green MGS codec. (would save kenno some time as he can just copypaste the same heads every page) The Boss: The Cheetah girl who used to lead the buns in MLWF. She taught Green everything she knows. Colonel Volgin: Alpha, the wolf girl with a hot temper. All Cutscenes compiled into a 'movie' for people who need a refresher on the game: <a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zndcY57Tijo" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zndcY57Tijo</a>
MizaruSketch
2018-03-10 03:40:21 +0000 UTCAl takes us on a tour of butts! Al goes through all of the best butts of the MLWF cast has to offer, dedicating 2 to 3 pages on each indvidual girl (Normal-Fel, Green, Monica, Adult bonnie, and so on) and convieing why each of the girls butts is so great. I know this was done some what in the tumblr asks a few years back, but I feel this would be a great oppourtunity to go into better detail!
Thestooge
2018-03-10 01:10:40 +0000 UTCAnother idea is showcasing what happened after this page in the canon comic: <a href="http://www.mylifewithfel.com/comics/2555895/390/" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://www.mylifewithfel.com/comics/2555895/390/</a> Would be pretty self contained, with a side a and side b part to it. One being muggs and deniz and the other being limestripes + fel + al. Not much of a "story" can come out of it tho... so maybe we should just focus in it's gratuitousness and make some real intense sex scenes :o It could start with a small retelling of what happened for the characters to get there, using frames from the previous canon comic. Fel being fired, muggs suggesting a trip for fel to figure stuff out, fel and al fight. Get back together, and down to that night they're discussing bachelorette parties.
Kenno Arkkan
2018-03-10 00:54:40 +0000 UTCBringing this ol' one from the freezer: I'm bringing this idea previously suggested by bscommissions: "just came across this. probably not gonna go anywhere this month but might be something for the future. loosely based on this image: <a href="https://68.media.tumblr.com/8a41976fc4bd97305a9940b81d2a715a/tumblr_oj5az4kwKK1rg3hqgo3_1280.png" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://68.media.tumblr.com/8a41976fc4bd97305a9940b81d2a715a/tumblr_oj5az4kwKK1rg3hqgo3_1280.png</a> porn-verse side story. in order to make the den some cash the girls open a pizza and pleasure parlour. could be done either with known characters like Al and Deniz but also just sorta blank faced anon characters. a selection of girls serving pizza and offering themselves for other services. " I'm thinking we could structure the comic like this: We use random faceless characters, (or not? i mean im open to suggestions n all :U) And we use them as vessels for the reader to see the whole pizza parlour experience. So for example, the comic starts with dude A talking to the hostess (say, Swift), and is escorted to his table. Next to him, dude B just sat down on his table, and is approached by his waitress, say, Honey. She then explains how the restaurant works. In front of them on a booth, we see girl C recieving her order, pizza of course, as her waitress, say, Trace, starts eating her out. Then, right beside them by the bar, we see dude D getting a blowjob by Green as dude E eats her ass. on the chair next to them, we see Monica taking dude F's order. "Oh... you're in for the main course already, alright follow me" And takes him to the next room which has a more club vibe with lights n stuff. and instead of regular tables it's more like club booths with couches n stuff so people can fuck more comfortably. Like, a space reserved for patrons who come for more than a slice and a blowjob. Then we jump to Futafel who is on the next booth, lubing dude A's dick and riding him. You get the idea, we jump from girl to girl showcasing the variety of "meals and services" the restaurant offers. The comic would end after a decent amount of banging, showing how the very first dude pays his bill, and leaves the place as Swift sends him off with a corteous "Thanks for coming to -insert name here-, We have open bar on tuesdays! Bring your friends!" Haha i'm thinking the place could be called "The den. Pizza and more" as if in this universe, the hybrids repurposed the den as this business :p Don't think it's much of a story tho :U looks more like a demonstration haha. and a chance to see the gals on skimpy waitress outfits i suppose.
Kenno Arkkan
2018-03-10 00:50:33 +0000 UTC
