AH22 p12 up, what's next?
Added 2017-06-08 03:04:22 +0000 UTCleave your ideas below, give a like to those you're ok with.
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that sounds like a great ending!
MizaruSketch
2017-06-08 03:13:35 +0000 UTCFor the ending, we talked about this on the discord IIRC, but how about if after the climax, flashforward a few years in the future, to a bravo talking to future bonnie, now all grown up. "And thanks to my legendary success on my quest for thighs, every bunny day we celebrate with full nelsons!" says Bravo to an impressionable bonnie. I was thinking this last line could be said on a closeup shot of their faces as they're about to be full-nelson'd without showing the entire frame, so basically you would only see their faces stuck between their legs, so in the next and last frame, the "camera" moves away showing how they're been actually full nelson'd with O faces :D Just wanted to focus once again on the motif of all of this, since by now i've been feeling the pages are just random senseless fucking :P
Kenno Arkkan
2017-06-08 03:10:50 +0000 UTCHow about next page we aim towards climax on patches, bravo-fel and shade-trace, so the page after that can be the grand climax and the end?
Kenno Arkkan
2017-06-08 03:05:24 +0000 UTC
