After-hours 21 p5 up, what's next?
Added 2017-03-09 03:35:58 +0000 UTCleave your ideas below, give a like to those you're ok with.
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Good thinking!
Kenno Arkkan
2017-03-10 15:26:54 +0000 UTCYeah. A lot of the hybrids may be mistaken for girls in cosplay makeup but seeing Alpha with her more animal features, baring teeth in a rage, would put the fear of god into the guy.
Mr Ru
2017-03-10 10:09:54 +0000 UTCi think if Alpha should be the one being super aggressive, would give him the fear and reason to avoid her later.
Arukath Hellsaint
2017-03-10 00:01:34 +0000 UTCXD he's trying to eat me! That's perfect!
Slikfiji
2017-03-09 06:03:50 +0000 UTCI approve of this idea! It's fully fleshed out and it's a good stepping stone page with great info that leads to the next one. :3
Bigweld
2017-03-09 04:37:24 +0000 UTCGonna copypaste a previous comment i did cuz i think this should be covered next page: "We still have to give the dude reasons for him to be afraid to blow his cover tho. So how about, on a later page, perhaps after his dinner is back and they've closed the door, a bunch of girls show up to ask mon about the situation. She then debriefs them on how he's a male hybrid and the inhumane condition he was in, probably due to human mistreatment. Meanwhile, the dude would be thinking "Who are these people? Are they like, fuzzies? Why do they speak in militar jargon all the time? why do they treat me like one of them? what is a "hybrid"? Then some girl could make a threat like "Those worthless pieces of meat. If i see a single human try that on one of us, I'll slit his throat and rip his limbs apart" or some very gruesome thing D: She could then punch the wall of the makeshift clinic (could be pawsy, cuz everyone loves pawsy) and make a big ass crack on the wall and make the whole place shake, freaking our hero out. This way, he understands a) these ladies don't currently like humans very much, b) They are inhumanly strong and have some military background and c) He's better playing along than blowing his cover. " The page could end with a cut to "Later that night" and we see a figure opening the door of the clinic with wolfdude asleep in there.
Kenno Arkkan
2017-03-09 03:37:47 +0000 UTC
