After-hours 21 p4 up, what's next?
Added 2017-03-04 04:33:47 +0000 UTCLeave your ideas below, give a like to those you're ok with :D have a great weekend.
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Eh i was picking monica mostly because she has less "screen time" than Green :P but both work for me! I guess we'll vote for that when the time comes.
Kenno Arkkan
2017-03-06 01:09:43 +0000 UTCyeah i agree with Ru Monica would be professional at first. Green should be the first, it all starts with a fake midnight checkup leading to a "full exam". but Monica going for an actual checkup discovers them and watches which could set up her curiosity in the next chapter.
Arukath Hellsaint
2017-03-04 21:54:13 +0000 UTCI imagine Alpha would want to see him pretty quickly and be the one to rant about humans. Especially after seeing a 'brother' reduced to such a state. (or would she be less sympathetic?)
Mr Ru
2017-03-04 09:47:06 +0000 UTCI was thinking of Green being curious and going in under the pretence of a checkup. Purposely flaunting herself for a 'reaction' and taking it from there. Monica's fine too but I got the feeling she'd be more professional with her patients.
Mr Ru
2017-03-04 09:37:45 +0000 UTCI feel like this could easily work with the flow thus far! All that remains I'd think is just the who and the what and the 'OHMAI' scenes in between until the morning after as they see the results of all there activities.
Bigweld
2017-03-04 08:32:57 +0000 UTCAlso, since we havent established really the who's and what's of the actual /porn/ part of this comic, how about we either make this comic about green and monica, or monica alone? Like bigweld suggested below, we do a cut to "later that night", as Monica (and potentially green? whatever works for ya folks) go to the clinic for an impromptu midnight checkup. The girls would then seduce the dude to bang them of course. They'd say things like "Mr. Wolf, you looked pretty perked up a few hours back, we wanted to help you ease your... urges." "Since the whole lab escape, i'm sure it's been a while since you have let yourself go..." and so on. The dude, having to stay on his role, """"reluctantly""""""" agrees. Could lead to funny dialogues like "Phew... I'm so tired of... being a strong hybrid... but you've been so kind er... rescuing me! yes, that I got to repay you somehow, right?" Sex happens, all while the dude makes his best to prevent the girls from noticing the zipper, or look too close into his mouth. The comic could end the next morning, when a crowd of hybrids have shown up with breakfast at his door, wanting to meet the mythical "male hybrid", only to find him neck deep in booty as the three of em are asleep and curled together.
Kenno Arkkan
2017-03-04 05:09:01 +0000 UTCWe still have to give the dude reasons for him to be afraid to blow his cover tho. So how about, on a later page, perhaps after his dinner is back and they've closed the door, a bunch of girls show up to ask mon about the situation. She then debriefs them on how he's a male hybrid and the inhumane condition he was in, probably due to human mistreatment. Meanwhile, the dude would be thinking "Who are these people? Are they like, fuzzies? Why do they speak in militar jargon all the time? why do they treat me like one of them? what is a "hybrid"? Then some girl could make a threat like "Those worthless pieces of meat. If i see a single human try that on one of us, I'll slit his throat and rip his limbs apart" or some very gruesome thing D: She could then punch the wall of the makeshift clinic (could be pawsy, cuz everyone loves pawsy) and make a big ass crack on the wall and make the whole place shake, freaking our hero out. This way, he understands a) these ladies don't currently like humans very much, b) They are inhumanly strong and have some military background and c) He's better playing along than blowing his cover. If this is gonna be a series in the future, this is gonna be the first time we have to establish these things.
Kenno Arkkan
2017-03-04 04:56:03 +0000 UTCI like this idea for a basis for the next page! I do however have a good starter for when the page after next comes around, like from the 'later that night' after Monica herds green out for the night from this example ya got!
Bigweld
2017-03-04 04:53:21 +0000 UTCxD I think this could go just fine in tandem with my idea! just change it instead of monica pushing green away, Green would just get down the table and look away, saying "...Mr. wolf i'm flattered, but we don't know eachother that well yet..." And then she'd be sent for food.
Kenno Arkkan
2017-03-04 04:47:10 +0000 UTCAlright, dunno the angle we want to take this story to yet, so here's my take on it: Next page, we start with monica pushing Green over: "Get your butt out of our new member's face! and go get him something to eat, he's starving". Green would walk away with a wink and a smile towards the guy. "Snakes... she can't help it, she likes crawling people's skins. Anyways, We'll bring you dinner, and sleep here for tonight. You need to rest" The dude says: "But... i'm not tired or--". Get's interrupted by monica. "Ah ah, doctor's orders". She leaves, still eyeballing his boner with both medical intrigue, and a smudge of arousal. Of course, he'd get a glace of that booty as she leaves.
Kenno Arkkan
2017-03-04 04:43:28 +0000 UTCI think our Fur-suited Hero is probably going to be thinking with his little brain over his big one at this point and simple grasp Green's hips and pull her close for a better look. "HELP! HE'ZZZ TRYING TO EAT ME!" "Now, now, Green! I don't think so! Look at how his jaws haven't bitten down! He's obviously just trying to show his affection... or mark his territory... or BOTH!"
MaveriKat
2017-03-04 04:42:55 +0000 UTC
