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After-hours 21 begins! What's next?

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After-hours 21 begins! What's next?

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Monica examining him could be funny: She tries to look in the mask's mouth but the popsicle stick used for pressing the tongue down, pokes him in the eye. "ouch!" "Hmm. Painful inflammation of the tongue as well"

Mr Ru

Yeah I was wondering how to tackle the zipper. Makes sense. The idea that the hybirds thinking there are others enslaved by humans is pretty interesting, since their view of the outside world is limited at this point. maybe They'd be sympathetic to Guy being weak compared to them and such.

Mr Ru

Also, if they think it is a proto hybrid, that would be a good excuse for his weird "anatomy". Monica would be like "Look at that massive head... they sure didn't know what they were doing with that first gen..." or something xd

Kenno Arkkan

Reading Ru's and Kenno's comments... I do believe they have been watching our Fur-Suited Male because he looks so much more animal-like in his costume. The rumors included that the previous male generation were more animal than human... And now they decided to "bust him out" once they see his boss come out and have an argument about putting more energy into his performance or else he's going to get "fired". The fiends! Setting the last male hybrid of fire is unacceptable! The must liberate him!!

MaveriKat

Either delirious or enslaved for human amusement xD On the practical issue of the suit and fucking, i suggest the suit has a zipper that goes all the way down to his crotch, but the zipper broke at some point in the abduction (you know, when zippers go like <a href="https://portsong.files.wordpress.com/2014/05/image5.jpg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://portsong.files.wordpress.com/2014/05/image5.jpg</a> ) so his crotch can be revealed if you push the fur to the sides.

Kenno Arkkan

Hmmm, there's no reason why they should know. the white coats had no reason to, but what if they heard the rumor? perhaps a staff member talked a bit too much once and now the hybrids know there were previous generations to them. I think it's plausible that they "kinda" know, but not for certain. This would only confirm these rumors. I also thought that they finding an ancient "hybrid male" would be a cool twist, specially since so many people ask for them on tumblr xd (although i rarely answer those)

Kenno Arkkan

Though the idea of them thinking he's a last surviving male hybrid is cool too. I forget if the ladies know about them.

Mr Ru

Also what should we decide on the futa thing or Guy's assumed gender? I was thinking that they're all regular girls and assume Guy is one too. When they discover 'she' has a penis, it's a reversal of this scene. <a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x98cE4QCrlk" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x98cE4QCrlk</a> It might give some reason why the girls are so interested in him.

Mr Ru

I think the most simple way to do the abduction is just him being grabbed and pulled sideways by many bunny arms from off panel. Then we switch to him waking up in the Den's makeshift infirmary with Monica and maybe Green. The buns are telling Monica they found this hybrid dancing out in broad daylight, so they must be delirious. Maybe on inspecting him (the suit), Monica thinks it's a wolf that's severely malnourished and he's put into their care. Might be a place to start for the first sex scene.

Mr Ru


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