After-hours 16 begins! What's next?
Added 2016-05-12 14:22:24 +0000 UTCAlright, i gave as much context as possible. We know they are at Al's parents', that they are staying for the night after a social dinner, and that they went to sleep.
What's next? leave it in the comments! Like the ideas you're ok with.
Comments
in regard to aru's idea, not sure if "Parent action" is something people wanna see here, but idk, i guess votes will say lol
Kenno Arkkan
2016-05-13 15:40:14 +0000 UTCNoted and fixed, thanks!
Kenno Arkkan
2016-05-13 00:39:42 +0000 UTCOne typo. I think it's should be "we should [let] the lovebirds sleep"
Mr Ru
2016-05-12 16:20:41 +0000 UTCi like this idea. (but for continuity the door should close behind her or Alfred and Susan talk about the door being open) Maybe as Fel explores the colorful Fungeon sees the straps and whips so she thinks its a torture chamber, maybe she spots something Catty in there and thinks its for her and that's when she hears Alfred and Susan coming and hides (get a little parents action in there maybe in the next page)
Arukath Hellsaint
2016-05-12 15:43:36 +0000 UTCI think Fel might be too stressed and nervous and just wants to fuck to ease her tensions... but she' can't do that there! Those walls are too thin! (She can hear them talking about her, which makes her even MORE nervous.) Fortunately, she remembered Al's father mentioning he had a small library in his study so she decides to pass the time with reading And I believe a certain book is going to catch her attention. Possibly something to do with cats... I don't know if would have the room on the page or not, but I believe that would be a set-up for her finding out it's not a real book but a lever that makes the book-shelf slide over to reveal the entrance of the Fungeon... which is all pristine and blasting out color, kind of like how Dorothy went from black and white Kansas to the (techni)colorful land of Oz!
MaveriKat
2016-05-12 14:41:45 +0000 UTC
