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After-hours 15 page 3 up. what's next

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After-hours 15 page 3 up. what's next

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Although thinking about it this is the type of thing i should have submitted to vote -.- My apologies. I had to come up with cool swimsuits on the fly since we started straight up with the buttstuff. I experimented with several styles and colors and i figured this was the best combination: <a href="http://puu.sh/o4vSP/5c9dde3df6.jpg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://puu.sh/o4vSP/5c9dde3df6.jpg</a> In my head, mugger's is something Fel lend her since its probably real hard to find swimsuits in their size. Alex brought her own, something that really works with her slim bodytype, and Soph's was picked by mugger from the erobox store lol. Something extremely skimpy for the rather featureless panda. Reminiscent of some japanese porn xD Also stockings cuz while i was looking for swimsuits i found a couple of japanese ones with stockings that matched and I thought why not.

Kenno Arkkan

ah derp XP

Arukath Hellsaint

but they already got swimsuits D: page 1 and 2.

Kenno Arkkan

as for swimsuit suggestions Alex has to be in this one <a href="https://s3.amazonaws.com/patreon/7402de8478334822fbea123f4fd654eb.jpg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://s3.amazonaws.com/patreon/7402de8478334822fbea123f4fd654eb.jpg</a> Soph in <a href="http://g03.a.alicdn.com/kf/HTB17eZDKFXXXXayXXXXq6xXFXXXQ/2016-SUKUMIZU-JAPANESE-SCHOOL-KAWAII-WOMEN-SWIMWEAR-LOLITA-GIRL-SEXY-BODYSUIT-SPLIT-GYM-font-b-SUIT.jpg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://g03.a.alicdn.com/kf/HTB17eZDKFXXXXayXXXXq6xXFXXXQ/2016-SUKUMIZU-JAPANESE-SCHOOL-KAWAII-WOMEN-SWIMWEAR-LOLITA-GIRL-SEXY-BODYSUIT-SPLIT-GYM-font-b-SUIT.jpg</a> and Mugger in <a href="http://i.imgur.com/MchCBLq.jpg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://i.imgur.com/MchCBLq.jpg</a> it should be one that goes see though when it gets wet

Arukath Hellsaint

i like the unpacking idea (digging Soph out with a crow bar) hehe

Arukath Hellsaint

I think you might want to add a moment where Alex and Mugger need to unpack Soph. Poor Panda girl was int here too long and they need to physically remove her themselves... Also, could leave to a small nod to, "Pawsy's Mom". Soph: "So going to need to see Monica after this. She gives the best massages."

MaveriKat

Next page should start with them getting to their room and showcasing the place where the rest of the comic will happen. Then Michael leaving for the expo to close some deals and whathaveyou, and suggests the ladies to not leave the room for everybody's sake. Perhaps after michael leaves they plan on putting their swimsuits and diving in the pool! Leaving the swimsuit showcase for the next page after that (something like what we did on this page of after-hours 8 <a href="http://puu.sh/o30gZ/65c7a91454.jpg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://puu.sh/o30gZ/65c7a91454.jpg</a> with fullbody shots of each one) That's all i can think of atm xWx more ideas next week...

Kenno Arkkan


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