page 2 after-hours 12 pending. Still, ideas for page 3
Added 2015-11-07 02:15:23 +0000 UTCSo yeah, something or someone cut the power cables outside my apartment building, so i lost all afternoon -_- I managed to do what you see above int he morning. It will be impossible to me to finish it today. I'll finish it next sunday (since I'll be busy doing a day-long stream on saturday).
Still, this shouldn't stop us from discussing the ideas for page 3. According to the initial script what should happen should be something like:
"Bagheera: Good, good! how about you? We didn't know you changed jobs...
Fel: Nah, Al and I do this on the weekends! It's fun! Usually together. It's some extra income y'know? Oh my... agh. this... must be very awkward... Of course it is, you were expecting a stranger. Your order came in and I was the only girl "equipped" for it. Uh... I'll talk to my supervisor, they'll refund your credit... or give you a coupon for another service, this happens more often than you think.
Bagheera looks sad, she's hesitant, like she wants to say yes but she's afraid her girlfriend would find it weird. Liz looks at her lady, and she knows exactly what to do:
Liz: NO! please, stay. It's OK.
Baghy: R-really?!
Fel: Whoa really? O...ok! Uh, where were we?
Liz: AH, right! Is there a way we can repay you?
Close up to Fel's lips.
Fel: ... Maybe.
"
Leave your suggestions down in the comments. changes in dialogue, how the frames should be, etc!
