After-hours p10 up! What's next?
Added 2015-10-10 03:16:30 +0000 UTCleave your suggestions below!
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a spread for the climax sounds very cool!
Kenno Arkkan
2015-10-14 16:09:35 +0000 UTCidea for the end the groups all at the main entrance inside or out. a little talking some number exchanges (i like Maverikat's idea). possibly a travel back home or arriving home panel for the den girls, Bravo saying something like the party was fun but she wanted to get some free candy. that way we can bring Bonnie back showing her at a table with the other buns sorting her candy in her pumpkin bucket and a pillow case. Alex putting a picture of the group together at the party next to two others with Alex and different groups of Den girls showing this is not her first Sexy Halloween. first pic maybe bagheera and her lynx gf as korra and Asami with a Bear robin and voluptuous starfire and alex as Yoko with a almost straight up Simon. 2nd pic Hexadecimal and bob with Alex as poison ivy and Honey Harley quinn.
Arukath Hellsaint
2015-10-10 17:40:04 +0000 UTCas for the next page the circle is a given maybe evangelyne pulls out a few Love egg towards the end to get them closer before the orgasm page.
Arukath Hellsaint
2015-10-10 17:28:57 +0000 UTCKenno, depending on how many more pages you want to devote to sex, I'll just say this. With so many partners getting it on in various places of the building, you might want to go to a two-page spread collage of everyone getting their orgasms. I'm also thinking the ending should be them agreeing to do this again every year. Witch: "Why just Halloween? We can do holidays without costumes!" Bravo: "Er... about that... we're... um..." Alex: "We're shut-ins who live in our parents' basements!!" Bravo: "Yeah, we're... wait... what!?"
MaveriKat
2015-10-10 03:28:31 +0000 UTCI suggest we focus next page on limestripes boning. Do the circle and the girls on the pot as previously suggested as well!
Kenno Arkkan
2015-10-10 03:18:29 +0000 UTCAlright, I have an idea. perhaps we should finish the comic in 13 pages total, not counting covers. cuz 13 is a number 2spooky4me. that would leave us with 3 more pages. we had this one with senseless sex on the room with bravo, next could be limestripes room, and the next one with alex, and last page with climax and whatever ending we can come up with. What do you think?
Kenno Arkkan
2015-10-10 03:18:06 +0000 UTC
