What should be the next after-hours?
Added 2015-09-01 20:54:38 +0000 UTCCovers for after-hours 10 is still pending for next wednesday (sep 2nd) followed by tumblr asks (sep 4th) but nothing stop us from starting to pour our ideas in here and start figuring out what should the next after-hours story should be!!
Just leave your idea, preferably a pitch of what the first page should look like, and that's it!
Other than that, just like all the ideas you're ok with (NOT JUST ONE!!)
I'll leave mine throughout the week :>
Comments
Sounds cool, I actually like the idea of color crazy, because it'd be fun to have one comic be a whole acid trip:)
Sierra Teylaas
2015-09-05 12:20:12 +0000 UTCTrue, but what is continuity. I had actually forgotten that
Garrett
2015-09-03 02:50:30 +0000 UTCbut alex was the teacher last comic D: your plot sounds like she's another student.
Kenno Arkkan
2015-09-03 02:49:02 +0000 UTCMy thought wasn't that it'd be "crappy looking" but when I am looking for porn, I don't want crazy nonsense colors, that just makes it difficult to parse. Maybe that's just me?
Garrett
2015-09-03 02:34:52 +0000 UTCwell one or two pages for each is the idea. I'm also against the idea that porn has to be crappy looking by defect cuz otherwise "it's too much effort for porn". Porn can be pretty too.
Kenno Arkkan
2015-09-02 22:36:00 +0000 UTCNew Patreon layout is bad and should feel bad. Glad they have that circle thing, to talk to us about stuff like this, right?
Garrett
2015-09-02 20:09:21 +0000 UTCNot a huge fan of pizza porn, I'm about neutral on this. I just want to add that going crazy with the colors can easily detract from it being actual y'know, porn, so careful with that. Also it sounds like a whole lot for 8 pages, or at least, a lot of chars - we'd have one or two pages each, if that (unless you work your ass off for it!)
Garrett
2015-09-02 20:07:59 +0000 UTCMaybe the end could be Alex facing off Mugger naked in a powerloader. (For a moment I thought of Bonnie's fuck machine being repurposed into a mech but that would cause a time paradox)
Mr Ru
2015-09-02 19:05:27 +0000 UTCWould be or wouldn't be? I thought a proper boning in the end would be the payoff for the teasers. Besides, I'm sure there'd be some nudity. Like a version of the Brett death scene taking place in the showers and the others finding the victim alive but exhausted from fucking and covered in spooge.
Mr Ru
2015-09-02 18:57:40 +0000 UTCAnother idea, and best of it all, it's pizza porn! It's Fel and Al's anniversary, and a bunch of hybrids (of our choosing, hell, even humans if you want, we could get deniz or michael in there) get selected for this VIP party. It would happen somewhere else than their house, perhaps Michael lends them erobox to do it (the products would be taken off the shelves of course xP perhaps it's just the warehouse they use for storage, who knows). The twist is, it's a pizza-themed sex-fest! (so perhaps we can spend less time /turning/ a regular setting into porn and just go, since the guests are well aware of what they're going to. (I'm even thinking one approach could be to start the comic with Deniz taking mugger to the party. Deniz might be a bit nervous, being it's first party of /this kind/. Mugger, the veteran she is, walks him through the experience.) The special guests are recieved by Futafel, who is only wearing a thong and pizza pasties. The place is spacey, with mattresses and sheets covering the floor. dim lights. future-funk playing in the background. there's towers of pizza boxes and refreshments, but there's only two flavors, pepperoni and hawaiian (still, we can decide flavors, but they gotta be two). One for tops or -givers-, and one for bottoms or -recievers-. Fel explains this mechanic, and the party begins. We could "head-jump" between characters as they grab slices. Say, we begin with Al who picks pepperoni and Fel that grabs hawaiian, so Al titfucks futafel as they eat. So other people start grabbing slices and asking eachother to do stuff, and the focus changes to them (that's head-jumping! you change the PoV of the story to another character). This way we can give 1 or two pages per couple and have a variety of action going. We can play with the concept, and have, for example, Pawsy cover herself in hawaiian pizza and have a bunch of futas or dudes gangbang her from every possible limb or usable-orifice :O as they eat the pizza from on top of her B) The comic could pretty much end when they ran out of pizza. and everyone is either too full or too tired to continue. or something else. If after-hours 10, the last comic with bonnie, was an homage to after-hours 1, this one would be an homage to after-hours 2 (the sleepover!). with more pizza to it. I would also love to go color-crazy (<a href="http://puu.sh/jXAGS/351caae1e7.jpg)" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://puu.sh/jXAGS/351caae1e7.jpg)</a> since i haven't flexed those "muscles" in a while. If we go with the Deniz approach it would be funny if we could do something similar like the ending of after-hours 2, with the dream within a dream and waking up in the middle of the floor with sexed girls all over the place.
Kenno Arkkan
2015-09-02 17:37:42 +0000 UTCGonna throw this idea out there. I like the Pawsy's mom comic so this takes place in the same universe. Basic idea: Young Al gets to school late cause Milf Fel kept him up all night and gets busted with Detention. My main/first idea is that he has detention under Ms. Mugger but I'm open to hear suggestions for other Den Girls as teachers. From there the sexy (mis)adventures of Al start happening. I would say we have some of the other young versions of some of the Den Girls tease Al during detention until Ms. Mugger catches that Al's "little friend" keeps hitting the underside of the desk. from there it would be sexy fun with Ms Mugger and if people want also some of the other girls or another teacher. first page idea: Al stroming off from Pawsy's home...optional fly still open as he runs out and just for good messure toast in mouth as MIlf Fel waves him off while she still looks a bit messy. From there its just Al storming into class (possible wide angle shot of other young version Dan Girls if people want cameos of them) and then either Ms Mugger herself or some other teacher giving Al detention for being late (either upon first time or its the X number of time this week he was late). what do people think? I know its a bit rough but I guess my limited english gets a bit in the way of fully writing this out. sidenote: sorry I had to edit this a few times but I keep pressing enter assuming it will jump to the next line instead of post.
BsCommissions
2015-09-02 17:15:47 +0000 UTCAlright, i've been thinking on doing an Alex-centric comic for a change. How about we adapt those 3 pages of sketches of "Alex goes to the doctor" and turn it into a comic? It has alex, it has turtle waifu, it has buttsex. here are the sketches <a href="http://kennoarkkan.tumblr.com/search/alex+goes+to+the+doctor" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://kennoarkkan.tumblr.com/search/alex+goes+to+the+doctor</a> The premise is simple, Alex goes to see Monica at the den's clinic with an odd ache in her privates. turns out it's just a bad case of blue balls (who knows, perhaps her ladyfriends don't let her knot for obvious reasons and she can't cum properly) Monica helps her out in a variety of ways and positions. In the end it was all staged between Monica and Alex, as a way to have some intimacy away from the orgy parties where it's "free for all". Perhaps there's something between the evil mastermind and the coldblooded doctor. We can use a different ending, hell, green and monica could share the doggy dong who knows. up to you.
Kenno Arkkan
2015-09-02 16:58:58 +0000 UTCI'm all in for an porn-comedy type of comic, not necessarily super explicit :o a page or two of boning before the comic ends would be a bad idea tho.
Kenno Arkkan
2015-09-02 15:34:36 +0000 UTCother other Halloween idea: (Alien parody. Could take place in the modern day Den or a space AU.) "Something weird happens to Mugger. Later there's a disturbance in the cafeteria, Mugger 'bursts' a massive dong, goes feral and escapes into the vents. Now the Engineer dept have to find her before she finds them." Could be a funny story with a lot of horror scenes to parody. Only issue is the setup for encounters wouldn't leave a lot of room for actual sex. Might actually be better if it happens offscreen like the Alien killings.
Mr Ru
2015-09-02 14:08:01 +0000 UTCSince it got some votes as a child comment, Kemono Academy 2 (or whatever) Same setting as the old one (japanese high school), but this time we follow (futa?)Mugger as she tries to get (futa?)Alex's attention/date her. The first page might be Mugger picking her outfit for the day, aka picking what (lewd) underwear to wear since everyone wears a uniform, then walking to school with Alex. Mugger is affectionate and Alex seems disinterested, until Mugger "trips" or something to give Alex an upskirt shot. Alex gets interested but plays it cool and invites Mugger to do something after school, which would lead into more lewd stuff as Alex sees how far she can get Mugger to go (exhibitionism-wise) before of course, they fuck.
Garrett
2015-09-02 02:57:16 +0000 UTCalternate Halloween idea: 1st pg. Halloween party at the Den in the common room showing the hybrid in varied sexy costumes. Cops, nurses, a nun and a slutty pumpkin (possibly Monica), dick in a box and Bonnie as Donatello. As the party ends most go to bed, Bonnie goes home and some past out. Leaving a small group gatherd around a jack-o-lantern. preparing to tell some "scary" stories. Pawsy tells the first story. Possible cast: Pawsy, Monica, bagheera, White glasses bun, Alex, Al and Fel. stories will vary with sugestions.
Arukath Hellsaint
2015-09-02 02:27:33 +0000 UTCHalloween idea: Some hybrids decide to use the occasion and hide in plain sight as they attend costume parties and practice their 'human skills'. Could have fun with their outfits. Green would wear somethong sultry, Janny Bravo could be a sheet ghost with nothing underneath and maybe somebody like Pawsy goes out bare because humans would assume it's a fullbody costume. Not sure on plot. Different characters flirting with random humans (cameos?), getting really friendly, (getting kicked out the club) and maybe go 'trick and treat' to have fun with guys they may have spotted in the past.
Mr Ru
2015-09-01 23:49:07 +0000 UTCDownvotes brought a lot of negativity into things and it wasn't clear how many separate posts were on a post. I'm glad they're gone.
Mr Ru
2015-09-01 23:29:38 +0000 UTCWell Garrett, it's not to much when you consider the Hero Fight Montage... complete with sound effects. X3
MaveriKat
2015-09-01 22:01:31 +0000 UTCCould always revisit Kemono Academy with different students. Alex/Mugger/Soph?
Garrett
2015-09-01 21:24:40 +0000 UTCThe new layout is garbage, for a lot of reasons, but not being able to downvote is one of the worst decisions they made. Before you could approve of an idea, be neutral about it, or downvote ideas you actively dislike. Now I have no way of saying that an idea is bad and would not like to see it drawn other than to call someone out, which is potentially embarrassing and generally could much more easily lead to hurt feelings. That said, I think your idea Mav, superhero themed sex, could be good, but the way you describe it is pretty bad, in particular the phrase "fractured butt holes". It's also a lot of content for 8 pages which doesn't help
Garrett
2015-09-01 21:23:48 +0000 UTCMaybe a school setting? Al is the new guy at school and he's running into the MLWF cast as students & teachers, even have MilfFel as the principal:)
Sierra Teylaas
2015-09-01 21:19:26 +0000 UTCAlex testing her futa serum on herself, then soph and mugger. First page cold opens to alex in a lab coat and panties, drinking some unlabeled vial, or something ominous sounding. It acts as an aphrodisiac, alex falls to her knees/face down ass up, rubbing her panties as she grows a dick, which grows in spewing cum everywhere. The following pages would have alex getting mugger or soph to drink her serum and have a similar tf sequence, except with alex and the other person fucking them while it happens.
Garrett
2015-09-01 21:18:35 +0000 UTCThank you for pointing that out, Kenno. I didn't realize. I just wish I knew how to directly reply to a reply.
MaveriKat
2015-09-01 21:16:46 +0000 UTCThere is no downvote button anymore. so that whole thing is out of the table xD liking things up should be good enough.
Kenno Arkkan
2015-09-01 21:04:33 +0000 UTCPersonally, I think you should have people write in, "Second" underneath an option to give a clear view of how much support an idea has. After the last time, I found people were more than willing to "Vote Down" an option to make sure theirs won. Since last time didn't go so hot, I resubmit it again... We need... "Coon and Friends: The Fractured Butt Hole" A Super Hero story with Futa-Mugger as, "The Coon"... while normally a loner, even she can't keep up with the crime wave that's hitting the city... a rash of anal rape cases! So now with the aid of Snake Beater (Green), Kame Kunoichi, (Monica) and even the Mysterious Mistress F and her side-kick Secret Submissive P (Futa-Fel and Pawsy) this quintet of Heroines must save Sunshine City from devious Hybrids who are jumping men and women alike, leaving them with... *Insert Title Drops* ...Fractured Butt Holes! And what better way to stop criminals such as Dr. Diamond Hard, (Futa-Alex) the Jaws of Life, (Alpha) General Tsao, (Sophie) and the criminal mastermind behind all of this, Deceitful Dominatrix T, (Futa-Trace) than with a taste of their own medicine?
MaveriKat
2015-09-01 21:01:36 +0000 UTC
