Page 5 of after-hours up. Next page ideas.
Added 2015-07-02 03:32:18 +0000 UTCAlright, the bone's ready. What now? :O leave your ideas below and vote all the ideas you're ok with!
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i like the way these two ideas fit well together.
Arukath Hellsaint
2015-07-02 21:50:49 +0000 UTCCould be a few things. Pawsy bottoms out before taking in all of Al (good spot for MilFel's line) and Pawsy over-exerts herself to one-up her mom but burns out, like you describe. (Tell the true, the way Pawsy's so casual about it and how MILFel's apparently stolen boys from her before, it could seem weird if she's inexperienced. Could just reason that she's never got this far before and MILFel's treating her this time.)
Mr Ru
2015-07-02 13:56:50 +0000 UTCyes please i need idea for dialogue ;o; this line is perfect!! How about Pawsy gets to ride Al first as MILFel's courtesy, but after a page she can't keep going, saturated of sensations and stimuli and feeling she's going to lose her mind. That would be all the action for next page :O
Kenno Arkkan
2015-07-02 13:26:26 +0000 UTChngggg as much as i want to see two MILFels, i feel bad for pawsy!! TwT! I'll let the people decide!
Kenno Arkkan
2015-07-02 13:22:17 +0000 UTCOr an alternative: Al's so out of it, he's imagining it's Fel riding him and mumbles something that ticks off Pawsy enough to dismount and Fel takes over. Potential for some solo Pawsy on the side.
Mr Ru
2015-07-02 10:33:42 +0000 UTCFeels like she's going to tell Pawsy to scoot up and sit on it. Bit of mom/daughter banter like "This shouldn't be a problem for you, I've seen that toy you hide under your bed." Later pages, Pawsy probably has little stamina and it's left to Fel to finish Al off herself.
Mr Ru
2015-07-02 05:40:05 +0000 UTC
