After-hours 9 BEGINS! ideas for page 2 here
Added 2015-06-18 04:40:07 +0000 UTCleave em below! I hope you liked the approach i took for this comic :>!!
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You know I'm gonna have to make a Kenno Cola drink add right.
bracabrad
2015-06-19 03:25:05 +0000 UTCanime but not so much anime we need subs or dubs
bracabrad
2015-06-19 03:23:17 +0000 UTCThis. this all the way son. go go "milk" out them pages
bracabrad
2015-06-19 03:22:31 +0000 UTCSir, I like how you think!
MaveriKat
2015-06-19 02:58:26 +0000 UTCperhaps he finds milfel having the massage and starts jerking off around the corner, and pawsy looking for him finds out and helps him out with a BJ! Then, after a while, Milfel done with the massage finds em doing it ! And pawsy gets scared, thinking perhaps her mom will ground her or something, but instead, she finishes Al off with a titjob!! D: proving superior ! Making Pawsy mad D:!
Kenno Arkkan
2015-06-19 01:31:15 +0000 UTCIt's a difficult decision. A shower is more direct, but the massage gives Al a chance to see MILFel get a rub-down, the curves of her body accentuated so beautifully.
MaveriKat
2015-06-18 18:53:34 +0000 UTCI dig it. we can put the lyrics as monologue throughout the page. So first a frame of Pawsy complaining and telling al to go clean up. then next frame MILFel is putting clothes directly in the laundry, perhaps bending over so we get a nice buttshot, while al tries to towel off. And then next frame either MILFel entering the shower inviting Al over, or about to get a massage from monica :O which one of those last ideas you prefer guys?
Kenno Arkkan
2015-06-18 16:55:13 +0000 UTCSteven-universe-esque xD
Kenno Arkkan
2015-06-18 14:09:35 +0000 UTCOutstanding page, love the style you're doing here, though I don't know how I'd describe it. Cleaner?
Garrett
2015-06-18 14:01:52 +0000 UTCOr when he goes inside, MILFel is just about to get in the shower and invites him in to clean off as well.
Sierra Teylaas
2015-06-18 12:42:23 +0000 UTCso much yes
Arukath Hellsaint
2015-06-18 06:10:23 +0000 UTCWell the next lyrics are... "Is she there? Or she trying to give me the sli~iii~iiiip... (Give me the slip.) You know I'm not the little boy I used to be, I'm all grown up oh baby can't you see?" I'm thinking we need Pawsy turning to Al to complain about her mother and seeing the spilled soda, telling him to clean up because that stuff is a bitch to clean out of the pool filter... ...Upon which, the young Al goes inside to towel off... only to find lovely "MILFel" has undressed even further... either putting the clothes directly into the laundry before heading to the shower or, (to keep with the music video) getting ready for a Massage from a visiting Monica. Because we know that turtle beauty has the BEST hands! X3
MaveriKat
2015-06-18 04:55:16 +0000 UTCSo, how about if the whole plot of this is Milfel trying to steal Al from pawsy! (as she has done with previous potential boyfriends of her!) so throughout the comic fel tries to seduce Al and Al just tries to see or touch. Until eventually they do, Pawsy fights for what is hers against her mom IN A BATTLE OF SEX! D: how does that sound as a rough idea? xD Also, still dont know whats going to happen next page. Specifics would be a good idea.
Kenno Arkkan
2015-06-18 04:47:03 +0000 UTC
