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After-hours 9 BEGINS! ideas for page 2 here

leave em below! I hope you liked the approach i took for this comic :>!!

After-hours 9 BEGINS! ideas for page 2 here

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You know I'm gonna have to make a Kenno Cola drink add right.

bracabrad

anime but not so much anime we need subs or dubs

bracabrad

This. this all the way son. go go "milk" out them pages

bracabrad

Sir, I like how you think!

MaveriKat

perhaps he finds milfel having the massage and starts jerking off around the corner, and pawsy looking for him finds out and helps him out with a BJ! Then, after a while, Milfel done with the massage finds em doing it ! And pawsy gets scared, thinking perhaps her mom will ground her or something, but instead, she finishes Al off with a titjob!! D: proving superior ! Making Pawsy mad D:!

Kenno Arkkan

It's a difficult decision. A shower is more direct, but the massage gives Al a chance to see MILFel get a rub-down, the curves of her body accentuated so beautifully.

MaveriKat

I dig it. we can put the lyrics as monologue throughout the page. So first a frame of Pawsy complaining and telling al to go clean up. then next frame MILFel is putting clothes directly in the laundry, perhaps bending over so we get a nice buttshot, while al tries to towel off. And then next frame either MILFel entering the shower inviting Al over, or about to get a massage from monica :O which one of those last ideas you prefer guys?

Kenno Arkkan

Steven-universe-esque xD

Kenno Arkkan

Outstanding page, love the style you're doing here, though I don't know how I'd describe it. Cleaner?

Garrett

Or when he goes inside, MILFel is just about to get in the shower and invites him in to clean off as well.

Sierra Teylaas

so much yes

Arukath Hellsaint

Well the next lyrics are... "Is she there? Or she trying to give me the sli~iii~iiiip... (Give me the slip.) You know I'm not the little boy I used to be, I'm all grown up oh baby can't you see?" I'm thinking we need Pawsy turning to Al to complain about her mother and seeing the spilled soda, telling him to clean up because that stuff is a bitch to clean out of the pool filter... ...Upon which, the young Al goes inside to towel off... only to find lovely "MILFel" has undressed even further... either putting the clothes directly into the laundry before heading to the shower or, (to keep with the music video) getting ready for a Massage from a visiting Monica. Because we know that turtle beauty has the BEST hands! X3

MaveriKat

So, how about if the whole plot of this is Milfel trying to steal Al from pawsy! (as she has done with previous potential boyfriends of her!) so throughout the comic fel tries to seduce Al and Al just tries to see or touch. Until eventually they do, Pawsy fights for what is hers against her mom IN A BATTLE OF SEX! D: how does that sound as a rough idea? xD Also, still dont know whats going to happen next page. Specifics would be a good idea.

Kenno Arkkan


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