Opinions wanted for Chapter 173 (chapter is also 174 posted)
Added 2023-09-15 05:54:34 +0000 UTCConcerning the way Fay and Laun's sister have a bet (which may or may not turn into an event of some sort): I originally put it down that Fay's part of the bet, should she lose, would be to let Linela sleep with Riven and take him to the ball as a guest that night. Should Linela lose, she'd work in a brothel for a day
Then I reread it and figured it may be a bit too much. So I changed it to where the bets are now 'work in a cow ben shoveling shit for a week' vs. 'take riven to the ball as a date'. Someone pointed out they liked the first one better
And I'm kinda torn.
Thoughts?
Comments
A lot of really good comment already. lol think the second bet makes more sense though I didnβt PARTICULARLY have a problem with the first bet, more Rivenβs lack of reaction, which was already mentioned above. So far, Riven hasnβt agreed and EITHER bet and he could simply refuse as I doubt heβd do either bet unless Fae somehow convinced him (sex is doubtful but ball more likely). I also agree that it seems a bit far fetched that Linela would follow through and work in a brothel.
Nomjy
2023-09-15 16:00:54 +0000 UTCYou have a demon of lust of unknown age facing off against a teenager noble I believe the bet should reflect who they are and where they come from I was thinking Fay would go harder for Riven Bet your soul or take a pillar type situation rather than just a night or π© shoveling
Austin Gibbs
2023-09-15 12:41:07 +0000 UTC
