Action Toys page 26
Added 2024-02-29 14:49:07 +0000 UTCHey, what you voted for is finally happening! For the Managed Democracy!
Both Control Freak and StarFire maybe little out of characters in this page, but we in a porn comics and we need to move story forward.
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This page and next one will stay on dropbox.
https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fo/mg2bwx23t8xtskk77zz2c/h?rlkey=e8dl6cxapluawl4rhjo1zfva2&dl=0
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Bottom panel even before animation is a most difficult panel in part 3 so far, but also a best one.
Things to fix in a previous panels:
- Raven headband to blue
+ Starfire headbands to gold (it looks better)
+ Chain instead of a bar for Stars back restrains (bar is a more interesting idea, but chain simply looks clearer)
That's exactly the reason why I not post pages outside of patreon as soon as I finish one.
Comments
This is art-style issue: I'm not an expert dick-artist and new style put more restrictions on top of it. If/When I drew it on my normal style it will look better =)
SanePerson
2024-04-13 09:27:06 +0000 UTCI love the comic and voted yes to sex scenes... Tho I find the way is c*ck is drawn is real strange. Bro has a dildo down there? Lol, give us a big veiny one ;)
Nathan Onias
2024-04-13 07:23:12 +0000 UTCRaven's absolutely ready to explode!! she's about to learn the secret hidden technique "magic without the mantra" or something
IvyReed
2024-03-08 22:34:45 +0000 UTCHot DANG, those wrist cuffs coupled with the upper arm chain forcing her elbows to stay bent like that is a real treat! Also, did that even count as a command? Starfire better get some extra points to her score for volunteering. (I see your comment up above, consider me the most amount of excited for the next page!)
IvyReed
2024-03-08 22:33:02 +0000 UTCSweet, we wouldn’t want anything suspect going on in this scenario
George
2024-03-02 05:42:33 +0000 UTCI wonder what other cosplays cf is working on next 😂
engagecrayfish0
2024-03-02 01:17:38 +0000 UTCAnimations are amazing!
Ondrushko
2024-03-01 22:10:00 +0000 UTCI was more referring to the people claiming it was OOC for Starfire to act as she did. I'd frankly overlooked you'd said that, because CF here is right in line with what I'd have done, were I him.
Shremedy
2024-03-01 17:10:01 +0000 UTCAwwh poor Kori 😂 bite him
engagecrayfish0
2024-03-01 12:05:20 +0000 UTCGreat, Just entered my Vote! :D Dancing raven was a little Epic tbh.
lowbrow93
2024-03-01 08:56:35 +0000 UTCon the contrary, it's a pretty valid point. I even hold a poll first time i did an animated page https://www.patreon.com/posts/at-page-13-good-82195221 to see how many people want to see more animated pages. I don't animate every page, only those who will heavily benefit from such - and also Raven dance cause I wanted to =) - and there will be no animated pages for a while. Also in case of this exact page - drawing bottom panel took like x2 time than animating it. But that's an exception due to difficult angle and easy movements
SanePerson
2024-03-01 08:49:54 +0000 UTCMaybe an unpopular opinion: i think the animations are a bit redundant. i can Imagine Most of the animated movements myself, and depending on how much Work they are, it might be better to save Them for later and Progress the Story First. But what do i know?
lowbrow93
2024-03-01 08:41:00 +0000 UTCThat is a whole story of next page)
SanePerson
2024-03-01 07:41:31 +0000 UTCI said "maybe little OoC" =) yeah, I established before why both Starfire and Raven behave this way, and that will be later expanded upon more. Also it is out of character mostly for Control Freak: I believe that if I write him 100% how he was in a show, he probably would play with titans, but will not escalate it to sex.
SanePerson
2024-03-01 07:41:06 +0000 UTCExcellent work
Guy
2024-03-01 03:30:19 +0000 UTCLove it! Glad to see task finally get a win
Brayson
2024-03-01 01:42:37 +0000 UTC"Not in character?" I disagree. Back on Page 20, Starfire established their first submission by example, leading Raven to do likewise; Star's thoughts are to "go along, and look for an opportunity", while Raven fulminates. Also pay attention to the looks Star is sending every time Raven's reduced to a drooling, dripping, post-orgasmic mess; she is very concerned for her friend, she's seen how brittle Raven's sanity can be, and what happens when she loses it. She's also, rightly, concerned about what would happen to *CF* if Raven goes full demon...CF really doesn't know what he's toying with, nor the true danger he's putting himself in! THEREFORE, to de-escalate the scene, to prevent a demonic outbreak, she is leading (into submission) by example once again.
Shremedy
2024-03-01 00:49:52 +0000 UTCJust one question, does Starfire get Task Received & points for this?
George
2024-03-01 00:35:56 +0000 UTCWow this is amazing, well done!
Todin
2024-02-29 23:58:13 +0000 UTCI understand, not rape fest, but it would be nice to see some sexual scenes and some forceful scenes, specially with Raven. I think the ring gag idea on Raven after she refuses BJ would be REALLY hot. Also, 40% of the voters on the poll voted for either "fuck fest" or "a lot of sex", so, again, it would be great to see some forceful and rapey scenes, even if the focus of the comics isn't that. Anyway, nice work as always.
vanesso
2024-02-29 20:33:11 +0000 UTCIf Raven received the same task, she would choose punishment instead. Star is not "easy", I shown her refusing to cooperate at first and she just doesn't waste energy on pointless resistance. Star vibe is "this isn't the worst sexual slavery I've been into." Also comics is not gonna devolve into rape fest, like I said there will be some sexual scenes but not a lot and simply put CF is not into it, he is more into roleplay
SanePerson
2024-02-29 20:17:10 +0000 UTCThe only thing I would "improve upon" is the fact that Starfire accepted it too easily. I wish she would "resist" and "dislike" the situation a bit more, and CF would have to be more "forceful," because he really escalated things and she "just went for it" with a normal facial expression. I hope that with Raven, he can be a little more forceful, since she is more defiant. Maybe she can refuse to open her mouth, and CF is forced to use a ring gag or something along those lines.
vanesso
2024-02-29 18:35:20 +0000 UTCA touch Out of character, but also Plausible considering the situation. Nice work
kou32
2024-02-29 16:57:10 +0000 UTCWhat we want to see is CF "having his way" with the captured heroines against their will, and then see their reactions. That's what's hot about bondage/domination comics. Good job.
vanesso
2024-02-29 16:07:34 +0000 UTCI love the animation ! Good work !
Indy
2024-02-29 15:41:17 +0000 UTCCF will probably bring Raven and her emotions under control in the next page.
The Mu
2024-02-29 15:10:27 +0000 UTCRaven just worded it wrong, that's all.
A fan
2024-02-29 15:02:09 +0000 UTC
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