Action Toys page 24
Added 2024-02-08 16:44:33 +0000 UTCDoes this comic really need this scene? Probably not...
But I just wanted to animate a little dance and no one can stop me =)
Proper size is in attachments, Patreon resize gifs and mess them up in the process.
Like I said comics going in directions people probably didn't expect =)
Previous 2 pages have slight edits on them, mostly design related: bubles in 22th page is without black outlines now and I added a "visible music" on page 23.
Next page is NOT animated, or at least not fully. Initially I planned to make 2 dance animations, with a second being more complicated and also with frame-by-frame animated elements, but I droped this idea and will experiment with traditional animation some other time.
Comments
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Behrad Bagheri
2024-02-13 16:34:14 +0000 UTClater this week, most likely on the weekend
SanePerson
2024-02-13 11:02:29 +0000 UTCwhen we'll see the next page π₯²?
Behrad Bagheri
2024-02-13 08:30:43 +0000 UTCThat makes sense. Wonder if thatβs why anime gag scenes donβt usually show them getting gagged.
jerry jerome
2024-02-10 04:29:29 +0000 UTCThank you!
HotDog89
2024-02-09 22:46:06 +0000 UTChttps://www.tiktok.com/t/ZT8c39sMP/
engagecrayfish0
2024-02-09 22:01:36 +0000 UTCI really love the animation, simple but very fluid. Especially the expression work on raven as it shifts.
kou32
2024-02-09 18:08:03 +0000 UTCwell, good luck on your journey into animation =)
SanePerson
2024-02-09 15:52:51 +0000 UTCIβve started practicing with animation lately, mostly sticking with lineart for now, and this must have been pretty in depth!
HotDog89
2024-02-09 14:31:02 +0000 UTCAfter just a break and costume change, Raven already rebelling again. Well, not outright, rather dancing mockingly. Yeah, she wouldn't go down easily.
A fan
2024-02-09 12:19:02 +0000 UTCSaid too many attempts when I tried. I'll try again later.
Vysirez
2024-02-09 11:25:18 +0000 UTCOn the other hand, Star may start showing Raven some moves, to help her. Or advice like "move your whole body. not just your hips". CF hasn't forbidden her to do so
Shremedy
2024-02-09 09:03:26 +0000 UTCAlso I have a scene much later where StarFire in a sweet maner will tell CF that if he really harm Raven, then "No-Kill-Rule will be off and you will die =)"
SanePerson
2024-02-09 07:30:02 +0000 UTCThis kind of style require to be less detailed, so in a smaller panels I don't draw smaller elements
SanePerson
2024-02-09 07:21:17 +0000 UTCI can, but that will require frame-by-frame animation, which would take a long time.
SanePerson
2024-02-09 07:18:49 +0000 UTCHe is not harming Raven, he just bump the settings of Raven's belt for a short time. It's hard to convey this in one panel, but previously I drscribed that belts do not inflict direct pain.
SanePerson
2024-02-09 07:17:18 +0000 UTCwow. if only you could animate gag scenes
jerry jerome
2024-02-09 05:41:56 +0000 UTCHot dance! Bondage and dancing go well, especially when animated! And the animation is great. Loof forward to what dance she'll do next page
Second of Many
2024-02-09 04:09:57 +0000 UTCMaybe this one will match a bit better? youtube.com/shorts/W8MhZVbx6uI Coming as it does from the kpop realm, CF should love it!
Shremedy
2024-02-09 04:02:46 +0000 UTCNice work. He better remember that Star is right there next to him and she might react a little negatively to how he's 'encouraging' Raven to improve, he was rather careless during the first session after all.
SeaGull (aka FriendlyFire)
2024-02-09 03:22:34 +0000 UTCI need the comic to have this scene, and that should be more than enough!
IvyReed
2024-02-09 03:04:23 +0000 UTCIt's nice-ish, yeah
Necromanzer
2024-02-08 23:32:11 +0000 UTCWe need more raven dancing
Chloe
2024-02-08 22:31:50 +0000 UTCAnother amazing job.
s22132
2024-02-08 22:27:01 +0000 UTCHow about this? A little old, and not Disney, but its just about the right tempo -- youtube.com/shorts/v8Lf8Smj1J4
Shremedy
2024-02-08 22:09:02 +0000 UTCIf you wanna animate a little dance, you go right ahead lol!
Trevor Bond
2024-02-08 21:27:41 +0000 UTCyo that pose in the punish panel is *chef's kiss*
Mobsterkingpin
2024-02-08 21:24:14 +0000 UTCI'd like to suggest a couple of minor tweaks to the art, if I may. Both of these are for the inset panel where Raven is getting jolted. 1. If her top is sheer enough to even partially show her aureoles in the main frame, it should also be in the inset. 2. How about (involuntary) pokies as a reaction to the jolt going up her spine? They're kind of there in the main frame as well.
Shremedy
2024-02-08 18:40:32 +0000 UTCAnother delightful page -- love the sense of humor it has, and the encouragement for Raven to get a little more creative.
Aidenke
2024-02-08 18:13:53 +0000 UTCFound one: https://youtu.be/2tkIdfhg2E4?t=34
Necromanzer
2024-02-08 18:01:44 +0000 UTCGeneral idea is that while they are in a Disney movie (or any movie) they can hear the soundtrack. So basically pick a more fitting Aladdin tune)
SanePerson
2024-02-08 17:56:54 +0000 UTCIs there any kind of song you had in mind playing for her to dance to? ^^
Necromanzer
2024-02-08 17:45:46 +0000 UTCThese animated panels are so impressive. It's already so good but this is just over the top fantastic.
Xianroberts
2024-02-08 17:16:50 +0000 UTCWow! and what's next with some motivation and effort?! Nice and cute animation, Bravo :)
Hatchet
2024-02-08 17:14:37 +0000 UTCWill this be the "boost" Raven need? π
The Mu
2024-02-08 17:12:26 +0000 UTCI don't know all tik tok dances )
SanePerson
2024-02-08 16:55:37 +0000 UTCI figured she'd do the girly pop metal dance from goth TikTok! π
engagecrayfish0
2024-02-08 16:54:16 +0000 UTCVery cute!! π
Dashole
2024-02-08 16:52:00 +0000 UTCThat was mesmerizing, but I agree, she could do better
Cristeal
2024-02-08 16:48:24 +0000 UTCthat animation is incredible, very impressive!
TheMillersThree
2024-02-08 16:48:03 +0000 UTC
