Action Toys bonus + updates on pages 10-12
Added 2023-04-17 15:59:13 +0000 UTCBy popular (one) demand - Raven in her chair without Control Freak + version with her not cosplaying Wednesday.
Also - page 10 , page 11 and page 12 got masive edits, mainly on girls faces (eyes and noses); also I decided to slightly change how I drew StarFire bang; redraw Raven's legs and ass in chair panel; and tone down TV effect (it looks more distracting outside of Patreon picture-viewer) + some minor fixes.
I think this 3 pages looks much better now, and can be considerate a final versions - if I donโt suddenly feel like spending another day editing.
All pages have previous versions included, so you can compare them
Page 13 in a process, half-way drawn
Comments
There are both absolutely spectacular. Have I mentioned I love your art?
Vysirez
2023-04-18 14:43:50 +0000 UTCsweet sweet bonus
2023-04-18 10:47:45 +0000 UTCNo complaints here ๐
The Mu
2023-04-17 16:29:41 +0000 UTCI am in favor of the changes! โ๐ They look less cartoonish, and it does improve the proportions (e.g., Starfire's eyes on page 10, or the faces with the eye-nose ratio). Great job, Sane!! P.S.: I liked the non-Wednesday version of Raven too! Thanks to Shremedy for being that "unwitting hero" who gave the idea! ๐
TheGag
2023-04-17 16:21:58 +0000 UTC
