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My happy place

6/10/25

To be honest I’m not sure if this needs some more working to make sure the idea translates. I like the art but I’m not sure the connection between the second and third panels are clear. What do you guys think?

My happy place

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That’s actually solid advice. I think whatever needs to be fixed is definitely in the second panel, maybe something to draw more attention to the ears, the sound

Harris Fishman

you’re the expert here obviously. but if the second panel was a front-facing shot, a little more similar to the last one, then surely the attention would be drawn to the change in setting between the two panels and it might read a little different. idk though, plus that’s a whole ton of work to redraw a whole frame ik

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