Remixing Avernus (Early Access PDF v2020-04-17)
Added 2020-04-17 09:45:31 +0000 UTCThis PDF includes:
- The revised/corrected version of Part 3C: The Vanthampur Revelations.
- Part 3D: Investigating the Murders
- A version of Part 3E: The Poisoned Poseidon that is complete except for the two player handouts.
This material ended up being far more extensive than I'd anticipated. They were originally planned as a single installment, but just kept expanding as it became clear that the devil was in the details when it came to the investigation. The need for considerable revision halfway through the project (as previously detailed) certainly didn't help matters.
I think we'll be on a bit surer footing as we move forward through the rest of Part 3 and Part 4, so I'm hoping to cycle those into your hands more quickly. We'll see how it goes!
Comments
Awesome. Small thing: the sentence "The Poseidon still operates as a profitable tannery, but" seems to be unfinished. I'm also thinking that at least one of the dead refugees should be unidentified. Probably Madhuri, given your list. It's great to give everyone names and stories, but I think it would speak to the greater chaos to also show that some of these poor wretches have no one left to identify them.
colin r
2020-04-17 22:33:18 +0000 UTCCheers Justin! Your deconstructions and recreations are always very useful!
Ben Ferguson
2020-04-17 10:39:12 +0000 UTC
